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« on: April 15, 2012, 01:08:47 AM »

Okay, I just put a bunch of time into this and it's not quite done (the blue areas needs shaded), but here is a drawing of Ruri (the character who had the most influence in making me become a furry). I'm thinking of redoing the shading, the inking on the tail (I know it's huge that's not the main issue... I just think the fringe looks kinda funny), the eye position... but I really want to know what someone thinks about it first. Any other comments welcome too. If someone knows how to make her look more like she's walking that would be good to know, but I probably won't fix the pose.

Compare it to the sketch, which I think both looks more like she's walking, and more like she's turning to make an interesting point.

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« Reply #1 on: April 15, 2012, 11:09:18 AM »

The drawing and coloring turned out pretty nice.

Positions and action poses take practice. A bit of  
background art can help to show what's going on too.

Keep up the good work, and thanks for sharing.

Also check the "Artwork Techniques forum" for helps too.

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« Reply #2 on: April 15, 2012, 12:51:46 PM »

Thanks~
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« Reply #3 on: April 15, 2012, 01:07:13 PM »

Looks great.

Doubt it means much coming from an amatuer though.
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