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Offline desirulz123

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Critique please :)
« on: May 22, 2014, 02:42:03 pm »
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Re: Critique please :)
« Reply #1 on: May 22, 2014, 09:38:30 pm »
its different, you have a unique style ( good). im not too sure how to critique this one ( first) the red eye looks a little derp, but i feel its supposed to. i will gave you pet peeve of mine. watermark, always watermark work. but thats my opinion, you dont have to.

as for the second. id say STEAMPUNK although thats just what i like

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Re: Critique please :)
« Reply #2 on: May 23, 2014, 01:34:04 pm »
its different, you have a unique style ( good). im not too sure how to critique this one ( first) the red eye looks a little derp, but i feel its supposed to. i will gave you pet peeve of mine. watermark, always watermark work. but thats my opinion, you dont have to.

as for the second. id say STEAMPUNK although thats just what i like

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Yea it was someone's character and his eye looked like that didn't know how else to draw it XD thanks for the tips, and I didn't know i even had a style lol thanks for saying so. I always forget to watermark my work i will start doing it again.

I didn't really noticed that it look steampunk until you said something lol glad you like it :)


Thanks alot for your help


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Re: Critique please :)
« Reply #3 on: May 23, 2014, 04:32:02 pm »
I'd done on that art and like Korvre said the first one looked a little derpy :D
but anyway keep up the good work on painting cause that's talent right there :)
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Re: Critique please :)
« Reply #4 on: May 24, 2014, 07:51:33 am »
They are both quite well done :)
However, I don't know if it's just my screen, but the colors look a bit dark (I kind of had to concentrate on it a bit to see the whole picture).  Or maybe that was your intention, I'm not sure ;).
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Re: Critique please :)
« Reply #5 on: May 24, 2014, 08:46:31 am »
Both are rather dark in color so it's a little hard for me to
pick out all the details.

Over all it's a pretty good work, but you asked for a critique so here
goes on the first one.

It appears the muzzle has a bit of a twist as the nose, teeth are at
a different angle than the eyes. Nose more clockwise than the eyes.
The canines are angled even more clockwise.

Also the characters left ear looks to be a bit lower than it's right. Probably
would look better if the right ear didn't show all that much.

You proabably should practice a little more on canine teeth too.

One thing to remember in art is always try to make the little details
look good. They can make or break the whole picture.

The only tip I have on the second drawing is to watch your perspectives, and
details. Other wise it's a good background drawing.

One other thing that is good to do. Check the sketch in reverse before
you start coloring. I always try to do that when I draw.

Keep up the good work. :orbunny:



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