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Offline Daxenobis

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New Portrait Critique Please
« on: January 20, 2015, 11:40:43 pm »
Hello! I haven't been on here in a while, but I remember coming here when I first started drawing. Also when I first joined the fandom, and getting great feedback on art I had done. I haven't been drawing consistently, and have my drive back. I would really appreciate some feedback :)

For those that don't remember, or haven't seen.. here is my original portrait I did 2 years ago.

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9716433/

I am now working on a new one, as a different species. This time a Deer.

Here is the link to what I am currently working on.

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/15533307

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. I feel like I am doing better this time around, still not fully satisfied with it, but that's okay. I am relearning a lot of things. Thank you so much!

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Re: New Portrait Critique Please
« Reply #1 on: January 26, 2015, 11:06:19 am »
It's kind of hard for me to see the line art, but looks pretty good so far.
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Re: New Portrait Critique Please
« Reply #2 on: June 22, 2015, 08:55:43 pm »
Hello again. Thanks for the input again. I picked up a Surface Pro 3 and am really happy with it so far. I find it a lot easier to draw then on a Wacom tablet. My skills match what I can do on paper. This one should be easier to see. Not a happy pose. I'm trying to go more for a smirk face, but am having issues with how to do the mouth. Thanks again for the critiques Old Rabbit I really appreciate them =3

Here is the link: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/16907406/

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Re: New Portrait Critique Please
« Reply #3 on: July 03, 2015, 09:10:53 am »
Sorry I didn't comment sooner. 

It looks pretty good though. You might reverse the drawing to be sure your pose looks
good both ways. I try to do that will all my drawings. :orbunny:
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