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Greenstone Book 1: Greenstone Abbey
« on: September 22, 2015, 05:59:19 pm »
A few things first: I don't know if I'm getting back into the general RP board or not. However this one goes will decide that. Also, this has been adapted from the adult section, so certain parts will likely not turn out as intended.

The small ship known as the Star Runner rocked madly across the waves, tossed around like flotsam. Wind an rain punished those working on her deck, even the warriors, the priests, and the priestesses working to keep the ship alive as the Captain barked orders and worked alongside his men. Lightning flashed blindingly across the sky, momentarily outlining everyone against the black sea. In the dark of the night, with everyone working, who was to notice the stone cliffs approaching quickly?

This is based loosely off of the Redwall book/TV series by Brian Jacques, and will be seperate books, each using a new set of primary characters, keeping the old as background. Answering a question that might come up, ahead of time: this is a medieval type RP.

Rules:
1. No godmoding, obviously.
2. No arguing in either thread, with the GM or otherwise.
3. You have one warning, then your character is dead and you're out.
4. Anything that seems unfair should be presented to me via PM, otherwise it will be ignored(see rule 2.)

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Occupation: (priests, priestesses, and workers are just as important as warriors, though they might not be featured as often.)
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Height:
Weight:
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Re: Greenstone Book 1: Greenstone Abbey
« Reply #1 on: September 22, 2015, 07:56:06 pm »
Mmmm this has spiked my interest.
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Re: Greenstone Book 1: Greenstone Abbey
« Reply #2 on: September 22, 2015, 08:09:53 pm »
Name: Ashe
Age: 21
Gender: Female
Species: Rabbit
Occupation: Doctor (I can change it if you aren't okay with this)
Personality: Tempermental, easily irritated, sarcastic.
Height: 4'4"
Weight: 74
Appearance: Short (obviously), her fur is white amd she is of a slender sultry build, particularly endowed for her size.
Clothing:
Weapons: (if warrior)
Other:
how many neon pink and black rabbits does it take to screw up a lightbulb factory?

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Re: Greenstone Book 1: Greenstone Abbey
« Reply #3 on: September 22, 2015, 10:04:54 pm »
Name:Merek
Age:28 (under 18 will be apprentices.)
Gender: Male
Species: Wolf
Occupation:Warrior (priests, priestesses, and workers are just as important as warriors, though they might not be featured as often.)
Personality:Usually friendly, he obeys a superior leader,often will try his best. Is well seasoned in fighting. Likes to sneak around.
Height:6'5"
Weight:190lbs
Appearance:handsome, shady, Midnight black fur, bright orange eyes, some small scars. Bushy tail, thick fur, claws are grown out a little for combat purposes. Athletic look.
Clothing:(well armor kinda) thick chainmail(wears under cloak),black cloak w/hood that hides face. Gauntlets without finger pieces(kinda like something to substitute a shield and be able to move quicker).
Weapons:warhammer with spike made for piercing armor, good thrusting spike too, and single-edged short sword:wooden scabbard(various carvings and designs),razor sharp,straight blade, very sharp tip, bluing on blade steel. High quality made.(if warrior)
Other:Well suited for close-up combat, very skilled with his short-sword and decent with his warhammer.(deep raspy voice) Doesn't know his mother or father, grew up on his own. His rough childhood has helped him grow stronger emotionally.

(Edited some things here and there)
« Last Edit: October 10, 2015, 11:53:21 pm by Amducious »
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Re: Greenstone Book 1: Greenstone Abbey
« Reply #4 on: September 23, 2015, 12:38:37 pm »
I would like to join. I haven't read the book and would like to know what god basically is in this world. Is it like the catholic religion?

Name: Sierra Grey
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Species: Kobold (Small draconic humanoid)
Occupation: Nurse
Personality: Caring, kind, does as she is told.
Height: 3'6"
Weight: 67Ibs
Clothing: Wears a blue dress with a white apron. She doesn't like to wear shoes.
Appearance: Bright blue colored scaly skin, generally looks happy around others, yellow reptilian eyes and a tail that normally can be seen sticking out from under he dress.
Weapon: Carries a dagger for self defense.
Other: She is a practiced healer and knows many medicinal remedies/technics to help the sick and injured. 
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Re: Greenstone Book 1: Greenstone Abbey
« Reply #5 on: September 23, 2015, 04:14:38 pm »
Jacoby - I corrected your card the first time, so you're good.

Amducious - being advanced in all ranges of fighting is a bit too OP. I would accept advanced skills in long range with the bow and somewhat trained in close combat with the short sword or vice versa.

Talia - card looks good. The system will be somewhat like the Catholic Church, but the diety is the goddess Lunith. I actually added the priests/priestesses in; as I said, it's loosely based off of the books.
« Last Edit: September 23, 2015, 05:46:53 pm by Sledge »
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Re: Greenstone Book 1: Greenstone Abbey
« Reply #6 on: September 23, 2015, 04:24:20 pm »
Ok that makes sense. Do we need a few more people or can we start soon?

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Re: Greenstone Book 1: Greenstone Abbey
« Reply #7 on: September 23, 2015, 04:25:43 pm »
I'm going to see if we get a few more, but I'll probably start it either tomorrow or the day after.

Alright, I'd best get my cards, or at least the blanks, up sometime.

Name: Gwynn
Age: 23
Gender: female
Species: bearcat
Occupation: warrior
Personality: sweet and kindhearted, treats everyone as equals, respecting that they play their role in the world. Can become fierce if provoked enough, and can be rather terrifying on the battlefield.
Height: 4' 7"
Weight: 95
Clothing: varies
Appearance: light strawberry-blonde fur with deep emerald green eyes. Not drop dead gorgeous, but not plain by any means, and not extremely well endowed. Very fit figure.
Weapons: twin folding battle axes: Truth and Light
Other: constantly chews fresh mint leaves. was once a priestess of Lunith, thus the axe names.

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« Last Edit: September 23, 2015, 05:57:11 pm by Sledge »
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Re: Greenstone Book 1: Greenstone Abbey
« Reply #8 on: September 23, 2015, 04:55:28 pm »
Also, something I've meant to say, but kept forgetting: magic and guns are nonexistent... I think that's pretty much it...
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Re: Greenstone Book 1: Greenstone Abbey
« Reply #9 on: September 23, 2015, 05:20:21 pm »
I figure, I was actually think about maybe changing my character. We already have a doctor and they were generally better at medicine than priests and priestess were.

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Re: Greenstone Book 1: Greenstone Abbey
« Reply #10 on: September 23, 2015, 05:38:10 pm »
That would be fine, though might I suggest a nurse under the doctor we have currently?

Another thing, I'll be adding in characters randomly to fill in certain roles and interact with you others.
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Re: Greenstone Book 1: Greenstone Abbey
« Reply #11 on: September 23, 2015, 05:38:57 pm »
Okay, two questions.

one: Got room for any Merchant types?

two: Could i have two characters?

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Re: Greenstone Book 1: Greenstone Abbey
« Reply #12 on: September 23, 2015, 05:42:49 pm »
Deffinately and sure, as long as you can handle them, which I've seen you can.
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Re: Greenstone Book 1: Greenstone Abbey
« Reply #13 on: September 23, 2015, 06:19:34 pm »
Name: Zara Murray
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Species: Otter
Occupation: Merchant
Personality: Comes off as kind and pleasant but is also sly and very crafty, able to swing a deal in her favor
Height: 5'8"
Weight: 130 lbs
Appearance: Skinny build, Tan fur offset by fine, sharp dark gray markings on her face, torso and legs, Blonde hair kept back in a loose ponytail, dark blue eyes.
Clothing: White shirt with a frilled collar with a tight green vest, gold bangles on her right wrist, brown fitted pants with dark gray boots with tarnished gold buttons, gold circlet with small amethysts inlayed.
Weapons: Ceremonial dagger for defense.
Other: Lost her husband to illness while on a trading trip when their son was only nine. Her son is aspiring to be a warrior which concerns her to no end. Holds her knife reverse when fighting.

Name: Nico Murray
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Species: Otter
Occupation: Warrior (Apprentice)
Personality: Brave and intelligent if not a bit over-zealous
Height: 5'7"
Weight: 165 lbs
Appearance: Very strong for his age, very clear muscles on his upper body, short blonde hair, similar coloring scheme to his mother on the fur, has brown eyes like his father had.
Clothing: Green tunic over short sleeved chainmail, dark gray pants with green boots to match his tunic, has a steel helmet which he occasionally wears out of combat or training, and a single steel gauntlet on his non-dominant hand for half-swording.
Weapons: Arming sword with small leather buckler with a spike
Other: His ability fighting depends on agression and offense with minimal defense. Has minimal experience shooting a bow from hunting with his father as a child.
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Re: Greenstone Book 1: Greenstone Abbey
« Reply #14 on: September 23, 2015, 06:31:26 pm »
Cards look good, sir. Might I ask who you want Nico to be apprenticed under? Or would you rather he be apprenticed under them all to some degree?
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Re: Greenstone Book 1: Greenstone Abbey
« Reply #15 on: September 23, 2015, 06:31:39 pm »
Sorry just noticed that. Edited it does that sound better?
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Re: Greenstone Book 1: Greenstone Abbey
« Reply #16 on: September 23, 2015, 06:33:53 pm »
I'm cool with whoever mentoring Nico, didn't really have a specific plan in mind in that department.

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Re: Greenstone Book 1: Greenstone Abbey
« Reply #17 on: September 23, 2015, 06:46:13 pm »
Looks better, Am. I'll just apprentice Nico under all of the warriors PCs and otherwise.
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Re: Greenstone Book 1: Greenstone Abbey
« Reply #18 on: September 23, 2015, 07:35:35 pm »
(alright cool) Also just letting you know, I have school till 3:00 PM so I'll reply at 5:00 AM sometimes before i go. I'm on late at night too and when i get done with HW.
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Re: Greenstone Book 1: Greenstone Abbey
« Reply #19 on: September 23, 2015, 09:10:44 pm »
I made changes to my card.

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Re: Greenstone Book 1: Greenstone Abbey
« Reply #20 on: September 23, 2015, 09:12:48 pm »
Still looks good. Thanks for the heads up.
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Re: Greenstone Book 1: Greenstone Abbey
« Reply #21 on: September 23, 2015, 09:48:07 pm »
By the way I also don't get online until about 4:00 pm Pacific time. I have school.

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Re: Greenstone Book 1: Greenstone Abbey
« Reply #22 on: September 24, 2015, 05:51:34 pm »
I added a little detail on the short sword. Also just wondering when is the IC thread to go up? I'd like to know sooner(or whenever)
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Re: Greenstone Book 1: Greenstone Abbey
« Reply #23 on: September 24, 2015, 05:57:15 pm »
Don't worry about it. It will be up either soonish tonight or tomorrow, as I said before.
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Re: Greenstone Book 1: Greenstone Abbey
« Reply #24 on: September 24, 2015, 05:58:23 pm »
Alright thanks!!
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