Robotic-enginered Godzilla "Your Worst Nightmare."
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« on: October 15, 2011, 08:12:51 PM » |
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Ok,im 13 adn im writeing my first story called Left 4 Dead:The story of the first outbreak. I a mfeatureing my self in it adn along wiht some of my classs mates. anyone got any tips? BTW just pm me and ill email you what ive got so far  |
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« Last Edit: October 15, 2011, 08:15:20 PM by Raziel The Dragon »
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"It all started just a few hours ago...the squad was out on routine patrol across the plains...radio contact started to fail,all we could here were terrible screams...amongst teh screasm and gun-fire,we made-out one cry,'They're coming...they're...everywhere!'."
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Northern Mockingbird "Starting another intergalactic cold war."
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« Reply #1 on: October 15, 2011, 10:44:55 PM » |
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Well, tips concerning what? Combat? Weapons(I'm a human encyclopedia concerning that)? Characterization(You might want to ask someone else about that)? Plot?
Also, why not post it up here?
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Robotic-enginered Godzilla "Your Worst Nightmare."
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« Reply #2 on: October 15, 2011, 10:52:07 PM » |
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characters,plot,and some other stuff. And it has cuss words in it  |
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Northern Mockingbird "Starting another intergalactic cold war."
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« Reply #3 on: October 15, 2011, 11:33:24 PM » |
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And it has cuss words in it There's a censor on here, I do believe. Protip on curse words: USE SPARINGLY. Having a character spew out so many a drunken sailor is offended, is not good, what-so-ever. |
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Robotic-enginered Godzilla "Your Worst Nightmare."
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« Reply #4 on: October 15, 2011, 11:38:00 PM » |
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ok then lol,so just post the thing here or just star out the wods then post it?
casue there arent that many of'em
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The "Malamute Dewd" Alaskan Malamute (Husky) Administrator
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« Reply #5 on: October 16, 2011, 12:06:46 AM » |
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I would suggest you PM your story to me or another Admin and the staff will review it. If it isn't appropriate for posting, we'll let you know and you may have to post a link to it instead.
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Northern Mockingbird "Starting another intergalactic cold war."
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« Reply #6 on: October 16, 2011, 10:24:46 AM » |
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ok then lol,so just post the thing here or just star out the wods then post it?
casue there arent that many of'em
What Kobuk said. Also, is the grammar that you're typing with now the same as in your writing? If so, then you my friend have a bit of editing to do. |
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« Reply #7 on: October 16, 2011, 11:29:32 AM » |
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no its not the same as here,i just use that kinda grammar here when im NOT doin somethin important the story has ovrall good grammar and no abbreviations such as lol,rofl,lmfao,ttyl,g2g and others.
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« Reply #8 on: October 16, 2011, 02:00:31 PM » |
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Protip on curse words: USE SPARINGLY. Having a character spew out so many a drunken sailor is offended, is not good, what-so-ever.
I'd suggest not putting a transcript of the L4D characters' quotes up on this site, then. Cluster S-bombs galore. Also, if there's anything about L4D you need to double-check, any questions you're not sure on, I'm your man there. As with weapons, but Metalhead seems to enjoy laying out every detail a little bit more than me, heh heh. |
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Northern Mockingbird "Starting another intergalactic cold war."
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« Reply #9 on: October 16, 2011, 09:04:23 PM » |
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Metalhead seems to enjoy laying out every detail a little bit more than me, heh heh.
Now, if only I could do an excellent impression of Cortana from Halo or something similar, and have access to something similar to the "Gunsmith" Function from Tom Clancy's: Ghost Recon: Future Soldier to explain everything. |
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