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« on: June 18, 2009, 12:04:42 am »
here is the link to the story

http://charteam.deviantart.com/art/The-invation-of-Dragon-land-1-126201049

tell me what you think here
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« Reply #1 on: June 21, 2009, 07:21:49 pm »
for those who read it i am in the process of writing part two, and part one was revised FYI
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« Reply #2 on: June 23, 2009, 12:18:04 pm »
I enjoyed it quite good so far
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« Reply #3 on: June 23, 2009, 01:28:21 pm »
No offense, dear, but I think you should get a Beta reader. XD There are a lot of mistakes, and awkward wording and such. It would read a lot better that way - but you've got a good idea.
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« Reply #4 on: June 23, 2009, 08:03:44 pm »
Quote from: zyymurgy on June 23, 2009, 01:28:21 pm
No offense, dear, but I think you should get a Beta reader. XD There are a lot of mistakes, and awkward wording and such. It would read a lot better that way - but you've got a good idea.
thanks i have one now.
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« Reply #5 on: June 24, 2009, 12:04:29 am »
for all those who read it i have now compleated chapter two. it is gonna get editted and then uploaded
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