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furry arts discussion => poetry corner => Topic started by: Alexandre on October 24, 2011, 10:26:32 pm

Title: Furtopia Group Poem! Come Join!
Post by: Alexandre on October 24, 2011, 10:26:32 pm
Yay! I wanna do a group poem! Will it be perfect? No! Will it still be awesome? Hell yeah! :)

When you add to the poem, just add one single line to it.  Just one.  I won't set a word limit, but try not to make the line too long.  As the poem grows, I'll edit this post and put it all together so we can see what it's becoming!  Also, try to add a lot of descriptive adjectives and nouns.  They sound really cool!  (also, if you want to discuss things here, just be sure to put them in parentheses or italics so we can tell them apart)

Here we go! The first line (and, yes, I'm ending with an adjective):

Crack. Sound of Winter, a gemmed

And here's the poem so far:

Crack. Sound of Winter, a gemmed
mask of sullen emotion basks in
cold light of the white hot sun. Standing on
shallow ground, I bathe with
a river stone, feeling smooth against rough, past against

present. As false pretenses fall away I stand
confident in my actions, but doubtful in my
resolve. The way ahead of me
is a straight line through a chasm of infinite possibilities, and I
stand ready to face the challenges,
aware of the lost world behind my stride.  The

two-necked canyon flows with floods
Title: Re: Furtopia Group Poem! Come Join!
Post by: Kay Alett on October 24, 2011, 10:35:08 pm
mask of sullen emotions basks in
Title: Re: Furtopia Group Poem! Come Join!
Post by: Mylo on October 24, 2011, 11:37:29 pm
cold light of the white hot sun. Standing on

((oh, now I get it...I think))
Title: Re: Furtopia Group Poem! Come Join!
Post by: Alexandre on October 25, 2011, 12:23:27 pm
(you got it, Mylo!)

shallow ground, I bathe with
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Post by: Mylo on October 28, 2011, 01:54:26 am
a river stone, feeling smooth against rough, past against
Title: Re: Furtopia Group Poem! Come Join!
Post by: Kay Alett on October 28, 2011, 03:15:53 am
present. As false pretenses fall away I stand
Title: Re: Furtopia Group Poem! Come Join!
Post by: Mylo on October 28, 2011, 04:58:35 pm
confident in my actions, but doubtful in my
Title: Re: Furtopia Group Poem! Come Join!
Post by: Kay Alett on October 28, 2011, 05:37:47 pm
resolve. The way ahead of me
Title: Re: Furtopia Group Poem! Come Join!
Post by: Mylo on October 28, 2011, 10:06:30 pm
is a straight line through a chasm of infinite possibilities, and I
Title: Re: Furtopia Group Poem! Come Join!
Post by: Kay Alett on November 02, 2011, 07:55:08 pm
stand ready to face the challenges
Title: Re: Furtopia Group Poem! Come Join!
Post by: Mylo on November 02, 2011, 08:01:22 pm
, aware of the lost world behind my stride.  The
Title: Re: Furtopia Group Poem! Come Join!
Post by: Alexandre on November 08, 2011, 11:52:45 pm
two-necked canyon flows with floods
Title: Re: Furtopia Group Poem! Come Join!
Post by: Mylo on November 09, 2011, 12:01:33 am
while the window prism shines its hues.  As stars
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Post by: Kay Alett on November 09, 2011, 05:09:17 am
blink in and out of existence above me, so too
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Post by: Kay Alett on November 27, 2011, 12:06:55 pm
(anyone still interested in this?)
Title: Re: Furtopia Group Poem! Come Join!
Post by: Mylo on November 27, 2011, 03:09:16 pm
do my thoughts, my ideas, ebb and flow.  Fire
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Post by: Kael on November 27, 2011, 03:37:46 pm
and ice, water and earth, all are
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Post by: Mylo on November 27, 2011, 03:53:39 pm
set in motion.  Revolution strikes the balance as
Title: Re: Furtopia Group Poem! Come Join!
Post by: Kael on November 27, 2011, 03:57:50 pm
Turning they act as one. When