Just made up.

[Velvet Karuda Leopard]

This is a little poem I wrote describing my views of how some "humans" are known to act.  I am sorry if it does not make sence to you.  It is from my deepest mind.  The leopard thanks you.






               The Beast





In my heart I feel a beating
In my mind dark thoughts are fleeting

My darkened mind sits all alone
Amongst my tortured flesh and bone

Sprawled across the floor of my room
Pondering true love, life, and doom

Screaming loud to an unknown face
I beg for him to point my place

Now my soul lays parted and cold
To his dark world my soul is sold

I beg in darkness to the beast
Why upon my soul do you feast

His eyes of death are open wide
This is your purpose pear inside

I look upon a dark black void
Where all peoples dreams are destroyed

He says to me in a null voice
Because of me you have no choice

I gaze into his darkened eyes
To see another innocent's demise

I take in hand a tool of death
Being ever pushed by his breath

A soul so pure I have taken
To his dark world not mistaken

I hit the floor I beg the beast
Why upon my soul do you feast

He said to me in that cruel tone
With out me your are yet alone

Your life is cruel your mind is dead
I am the beast hear what I said

You now belong to my dark hord
And I am now your true dark lord

Upon the beast's words I am led
And upon pure souls I am fed

Now a true demon of the least
A rebell yell I AM THE BEAST!

[Kada-Ru]

That is very interesting, Velvet Leopard!

I can see where some fursons (people) can get so down about being alone and just giving up in your poem.

I can also see in your poem where the furson (person) realizes that the only one bringing itself down IS itself.

Two great points! I hope you can find some light and not just the darkness of the beast. I think poetry tells a lot about someone. Their inner most feelings and fears. Love and hate. Happiness and sadness.

I really do like your poem. It is well written and says a lot about oneself image.

[Rikimaru]

well that was breathtaking. i used to be exactly like that, but i have more confidence in myself so im ok. wow that is one of the best poems i have read. its a good read!

[Sunookitsune]

Nice poem. I think its the first one I've read that hasn't been for English though. '>