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furry arts discussion => poetry corner => Topic started by: GingerBear on September 16, 2011, 12:44:20 pm

Title: Random poem.
Post by: GingerBear on September 16, 2011, 12:44:20 pm

I dunno I guess I might strt posting some of my writing on here. Mayhaps. If you Luke this, and you tell me that you do, I'll post more. Enjoy. :3

I tell you all the thongs that you want to hear,
I let you live without fear,
Never let you know that I'm that fire.

You know I'll never let you down, my dear,
I promise to always keep you near,
Never let you think that I'm that fire.

Things aren't always what they appear,
Bit I'll never let you shed a single tear,
Because I am that fire.

Title: Re: Random poem.
Post by: Grizztof Grünwald on October 13, 2011, 09:19:54 pm

GingerBear,

Edit "thong" to thing. :)

I don't read much poetry, so I'm not going to critique, but I will tell you the poem does have a nice sentiment.

Sure, it took a month but you got a reply. o.o