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Offline willishannon

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Crazy life
« on: June 27, 2011, 03:02:24 pm »
    i like to wonder  my mind
    thinking about  all the ways i went wrong
    my past relationships
    and wonder if i'll get it right
    someday
    maybe in my dreams
    but not now its just
    another unimaginable  wish
          :)
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Offline PupLilith17

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Re: Crazy life
« Reply #1 on: June 27, 2011, 03:09:21 pm »
you still need punctuation x_x

but its still good :D
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