I actually kinda liked the song this time I got more of a humour vibe from it than just cheesy musical singing.
I too wasn't overly impressed with the song the first time around, but I am starting to like it more and more each time I watch the episode so I guess it is really starting to grow on me.
The only thing that bothers me with it now is how they animated some of the mouths there.
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So to the new episode:
2:55 Seriously... They went with the baby carriage thing?
6:20 -_-; ...honestly Rainbow, you're making it hard for me to like you right now... AJ needs to deflate that ego some.
11:20 ...Dash you're an idiot... Also, they have hydro electric dams? This is going to further stuff in the fandom like mad...
13:15 ....Do I even have to comment on what her friends just said? They just gave it away! Augh! I wanted the reveal to be at the end... oh well.
14:00 oh no... I'm getting flashbacks to Lesson Zero... Don't do it Dashie!
15:25 I got nothing and Dash is an idiot.
16:25 Dash you're an idiot.
20:00 oh by the way, I called it back at 8:35 and should note I did all I could to avoid spoilers for this, even the title.
Credits: They aren't gonna narrate the letter? I mean they did already sum up the episode lesson and all i know but still... Oh well. Gotta say, better than the pet episode.
I agree with a lot of the points in this. It was a very clichéd kind of episode, for FiM, and was so to the point of exaggerating Dash to the point where I nearly started to cringe. She usually does stop becoming
actually self-centred before it gets that bad (she comes across as such, but isn't really and knows when to be serious), so this episode was kind of like "...why's she being like this?". I didn't think it was too bad in the beginning, I loved how she was actually rather bashful about it; but then it took a dramatic turn when she suddenly started milking it with the baby (kind of like the dramatic turn with Rarity in Sisterhooves Social, though that didn't matter so much because 1. it was kind of funny, 2. it was Rarity (who had been being a bit overdramatic anyway) and 3. it could easily have been toned down without affecting the plot at all). It makes me cringe horribly when otherwise tempered and capable characters become suddenly overly cocky and yet incapable, or just forlornly desperate like trying to push Granny Smith across the road against her will. Have you suddenly lost the ability to stop and think Dashie? You're not completely insane like Twilight was that one episode... Fortunately this was not nearly as bad as in many
many cartoons and we still feel some of Rainbow Dash's real personality come through at lesser points in the episode.
The other Mane 6 seemed a bit funny in their Mare-do-Well costume; although it would have spoiled the plot twist they were trying to create, I would have expected to have seen some characterisation while they were in costume - such as Pinkie Pie prancing about somewhat á-la Tom Bombadil (especially in the crane and the chase scenes), and Fluttershy flying perhaps slower and more gracefully. In fact I think it could have changed the emphasis of the episode a bit - it would have shown us that her friends were there doing stuff, trying to teach her a lesson; it would have been great if we could have seen this, and Rainbow Dash not have known, because that may have emphasised that they were working together to make her realise her problem. We've also already had a hidden-then-reveal of this magnitude in Sisterhooves Social; it would make me worry that they might start to rely on it too much.
And yes, Ponyville did seem very strange in this; it felt much bigger and more built up, you rather got the feeling that it was just a small and quiet village, previously, even as late as The Cutie Pox, but here it felt inexplicably much more built up, and was even expanding, with the crane and stuff. There was even that completely out of place hydroelectric dam... The premise of the episode is clichéd enough, and then we get the ever-clichéd dam? A
hydroelectric one at that? Why would they even need one? Faust even stated they used magic for "electric" things (such as Vinyl Scratch's decks)... It's also completely randomly somewhere near Ponyville in some place which was conveniently un-shown... It felt nice in other episodes, it felt like we were peering into another, real world, with just a drop-in or two of some familiar stuff to make us connect a bit more and possibly for the ironic humour, like Scratch's decks. In The Cutie Pox we get a completely fitted out modern bowling alley, although it was at least in a nice traditional-looking building, and (...did anyone notice it?) the bowling balls there had no finger holes
. I liked the way they had the construction plot though; the crane was made out of wood, and the building was taking on a seemingly (and wonderfully fitting!) timber-framed design. Given that it was put in there, it was made nicely in-keeping. (and I don't care if a building that high wouldn't have been possible in wood!) But the hydroelectric dam kind of brushed all that aside that and it was kind of lazy to put it in the first place. :/ (I really hope they don't do this again, they're dangerously close to making it some kind of Springfield with this episode...) And what the hell is up with that road? They could have
so easily explained it by a bridge being out or something. Slight oversight maybe...
Having said all that though, I liked this episode so much more than May the Best Pet Win. There was much more action, and much more eye candy (background ponies, and Ponyville!) and it just felt more satisfying to watch. It's important too, that, I think at least, this Dash was
much more in-keeping with her personality than she was in MtBPW. It may have been stretched rather too much in some areas, but overall, I can see this being the
sort of thing she'd slip into doing. I'd like to think she wouldn't be so abrasive with it, and just be caught up in the fun and the thrill of it all, but at least she wasn't being so outright (and clunkily) harsh like she was in MtBPW. I don't really mind seeing one episode of this for Dash (and after all she is just about the only character they can do it to... or at least the most obvious), although it would have been the sort of thing I would have thought she'd have overcome before Twilight came along. But then, yeah, there wouldn't have been an episode... (maybe they could have given it more context?)
I will say though, as a cartoon, this really isn't a bad episode.
It didn't completely capture the charm and down-to-earth nature of Season 1 for me like Luna Eclipsed, and particularly Sisterhooves Social (and even some bits of Lesson Zero (RoH doesn't count because it was meant to be weird
)), but maybe that's because Ponyville felt so
big and busy. It did a much better job (and it's probably one of the most important things) than May the Best Pet Win did, maybe because it actually
had Ponyville and background ponies to compare with previous episodes, and continue that same feeling (which is why it felt slightly weird that Ponyville was so big).
I did like the return of all the funny, derpy background characters, and it was amazing how many lines they got this episode! The one whose peanut jar Dash was trying to open was amusingly (and perhaps refreshingly?) blunt, and a nice contrast to Dash's overeager urge to help at that point.
(Speaking of which... has anyone found Derpy yet...? Is she even in this episode?)Scootaloo was
wonderful in this episode, firstly her Rainbow Dash Fanclub (seriously one of the best bits of this episode!), then her coming to see Rainbow Dash at the end... many have moaned at how it was completely out of character for her to lose her admiration for Rainbow Dash, but to me it seemed the very
fact that she came back to invite her to the Mare-do-Well thank-you parade shows that she
hadn't lost her admiration for Rainbow Dash, and still, even if she was at-that-moment idolising Mare-do-Well, deep down she still had a deep affection for Rainbow Dash and was the only one to come back for her when everyone else had forgotten her. This could
really have been picked up on and made more of a point on though, it's really weird and unexplained quite why Dash acted the way she there; I know she was all sulky and confused but seeing Scootaloo could have made her realise that not everyone had forgotten her. It's touching moments like that could have been that make Season 1 so wonderful. Whoever wrote Dash in that scene was
really missing a good point, and a good opportunity to add some depth to this episode. (that makes two places now where even
I can see that the plot could have been improved upon.)
TL;DR:
I much prefer it to May the Best Pet Win, though I don't claim it to be a perfect episode. I was initially thinking of this as slightly worse than The Cutie Pox, but after writing all this and watching little bits of it and reflecting on it, I actually think it was somewhat better than that. It was a bigger episode, there was more happening, and that made it all the more enjoyable to watch. The Cutie Pox still had a lot happening, and that made it better than May the Best Pet Win. (I suppose you could argue that there wasn't a lot happening in Sisterhooves Social, but that had some really charming, and wonderfully relatable character-interaction moments, and really played from the characters' established personalities. It was also a slower pace which added to the charm factor of it, and had some good background character moments (like I love how some background ponies won!).) Scootaloo was absolutely wonderful in this, and I think where it failed to completely faithfully (though that's up to your interpretation) develop Dash's personality, it wonderfully added to and developed Scootaloo's.
Shame there were lots of missed opportunities with the plot, it could possibly have been an even deeper and more touching episode sorta like Luna Eclipsed was. Ponyville was weird, and there was a lot of playing up to clichéd things like the runaway bus-carriage, the random baby carriage, and the goddamn hydroelectric dam(n
)
Sometimes, I don't know it it's just me, but I felt a little like I was watching just a typical cartoon at times, although at others I did still feel I was watching MLP: FiM... I don't know - I'm not sure if it was elements of the plot, the slightly over-the-top and clichéd characterisation (for the sake of the plot) or even, I've been noticing, the new faces, which are slightly overdone I think, and can look a little weird and stereotypical of cartoon faces... I know it's just a kids programme, but I guess that's precisely what the
problem is; they could have settled into that a bit too much - watching the first series I felt a genuine sense of connection to the characters, a genuine sense of mystery, a genuine sense of
suspense and (have I said it already?)
connection. The morals (though I know they've got to run out of these at some point...) were usually done in such a way I was like "...wow, I never really thought of it like that!" or even if they weren't, I had fun getting there. The characters felt loveable and you really cared what they were doing... This one I didn't really care for Rainbow Dash when she was being all cocky and proud, and grabbing kids to have pictures with her... That's kind of stereotypical of the character that is usually portrayed in this kind of story, and almost
vain... And not the fun-loving adventure Dash I
knew.
I still prefer it to MtBPW; there's more happening and it felt
slightly more complicated. I just feel it could have been done better... and I can
see where it could have been done better. I guess I can extrapolate and imagine and make my own better story though... but it should have (and
could have) been in the episode. It did though have
better characterisation of Rainbow Dash, and funny background ponies, and of course some excellent Scootaloo! And her Rainbow Dash fan-club!
(Though now I've had two episodes which just tell me: "disregard moral; just don't get complacent and lose your wits and senses! and you'll be fine!" Oh Rainbow Dash, being the closest to this particular kind of character traditional story writers have... you never struck me as the kind of pony who would actually
need to learn that. You seemed pretty, well, cool before, all told...)
(Some TL;DR...
)
What we really need is less of this character-focused stuff; less of this "you're a terrible person, this is what you need to do to improve!"
We need a real interaction episode, kind of like Sisterhooves Social was, but most importantly, a positive moral! Something really hopeful! Something that doesn't need a character to have flaws for. For even Mary Sues should be able to learn from something like that... and that makes it a much more powerful and timeless kind of moral. But it's easier to just criticise people for their flaws, none moreso than the kind of character Rainbow Dash has been interpreted as :/
I guess next week we'll be able to decide how the exact nature of Season 2 is seeming.
(Wow, I never thought I'd be writing so much about a cartoon! But it was such an awesome cartoon, and didn't really feel like a cartoon, and I want to cling on to that the best I can!... Enough of my mindless ramblings! Time for bed.
Edit: some thoughts upon waking up in the morning -
I liked the episode, although there were obvious plot flaws.
It could have played to Dash's established personality better, rather than playing up to the stereotype;
It could have utilised the world which had been created better - is Dash still on the Weather Patrol? Is there still the Weather Patrol?
It might have been nice to see the Wonderbolts too, they could have been relevant. It would have been nice for them as well to not have created so much new stuff.
And something that I forgot to put into my huge analysis last night: the point where they stop and laughed would have been an excellent point for them to step in and say something, even if Dash didn't actually take it in (for the sake of the plot). But no, they just kind of stopped and jeered, like they all did to Twilight before...
The best things were probably Scootaloo, and the background ponies, and the fact that there was more action. Maybe this is the Feeling Pinkie Keen of Dash, contriving the world a bit to fit the intended moral. It could have utilised the world better, and that would have given it more of that feeling I feel we liked from the first series. I also felt it lacked a bit of humour.
But it wasn't too bad, all considered.
Ok, I think that's me over with