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Offline Mu Rho Ni

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Fursona first draft busts
« on: April 19, 2014, 12:22:12 am »
This is the first draft of my fursonas bust. there are two versions. Any tips or pointers before i go on?
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Re: Fursona first draft busts
« Reply #1 on: April 19, 2014, 04:34:54 pm »
Looking good! I love the hair and the overall look of your style

Just let you know, the top one has small anatomical error. The ear should be above the eyes, just like the second draft
Also if you don't mind , the cheek looks a bit stiff & square, a bit rounding it up would make it better!


I would recommend putting parts of two versions together. Like the hair from the first one to the second one etc.
Your style is very expressive! Keep up the good work  :)

« Last Edit: April 19, 2014, 04:38:01 pm by WhiteAkitaKeiko »
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Re: Fursona first draft busts
« Reply #2 on: April 19, 2014, 05:08:32 pm »
Yeah, I've been debating on mixing the two. Something funny i just realized though is the top one lookes like the werecat/wolf thing in the opening of thriller. Lol  :D
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Re: Fursona first draft busts
« Reply #3 on: April 19, 2014, 05:15:06 pm »
I noticed that too! Maybe that why I subconsciously liked it more ha ha :D
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Re: Fursona first draft busts
« Reply #4 on: April 19, 2014, 05:33:16 pm »
i like the bottom one more... it looks less... evil ^^
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Re: Fursona first draft busts
« Reply #5 on: April 20, 2014, 06:42:29 am »
The first one has scary eyelids (and yea. it does look like a bit like something from thriller) The second one looks really good though.  :)
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Re: Fursona first draft busts
« Reply #6 on: April 21, 2014, 10:45:03 pm »
yah the first one does have scary eyes may want to tone it down :)
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