Silent Killer - Need some feedback on what's done so far

[TheComet]

http://soundcloud.com/dj-comet-1/silent-killer-wip

I'm starting to work on some shorter tracks (2-3 minutes as apposed to my usual 5 minute tracks) in an attempt to see if my music is marketable at all...

going to try to sell off digital albums for $1-5 as I am now unemployed and in desperate need of money


This is going to be the start of these shorter tracks, this one's a downtempo psytrance/breakbeat track. I'll probably only post this and maybe one more WIP before I finish the track, where I'll take them down after.


ps: I know the sub rings, working on a fix for that (probably just the rendering)

[Hashira]

Can I go on a secret assassin mission and take out bad guys to this song? Absolutely! In digging it, just like the rat of your audio I've listened to a few times now you're doing great, and I hope you achieve success because you deserve it.

[Leeseetsa]

  That is really good. I didn't even really notice that the sub was ringing, until your comment pointed it out. :3 I wouldn't mind this being remixed into something longer!