The Places I've Been

[Kindran]

I wrote this while thinking about how lucky I am to be able to see as much of the world as I have.

The Places I've Been

I have seen the rising sun
I have seen it set
I have seen the Cherry blossoms
Floating in the wind

I have seen a country
Torn apart by war
Remnants of the great wall
That stood here dividing all

I have seen the sunsets pride
On white sandy beaches
Here is where stars are made
And build up their riches

I have seen fair Edinborough (sorry for any misspelling )
Where the Queen stood tall
I remember my door
With it's white doorknob

I have seen the western sky
It fills me with much pride
Though I feel a little sad
For it's always dry

I have seen many places
Only one place is my home
I belong in fair Nihon
Where Cherry blossoms soar

Comments and critique are welcome

[Kayle]

Nice, Grim.  I like it a lot.  It sounds great!