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Offline Kindran

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True dependence
« on: December 22, 2008, 02:04:26 pm »
You know not my secret
You know not my suffering
You say I cannot depend on even myself
Yet you know not the true dependence
I must live with the curse of my soul
My partner must give part of theirs up
You know not my suffering
The devourer of souls

A thing of beauty
For those on the outside
But for those within
It is as torturous as secret sin
To be able to feel
As all others do
The need to leech from them
As I must do
You know not true dependence
The devourer of souls
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As you may or may not know this poem is about me. It is what I and plenty other people like me deal with everyday.
I assure you we do not "devour peoples souls" it was just to get the point across. Comments and critique are welcomed and appreciated.
Sors immanis et inanis (Fate - monstrous and empty)
Estuans interius ira veheminti (Burning inside with violent anger)

Through my travel's I've seen so much but I know, I know its good to be home
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Re: True dependence
« Reply #1 on: January 02, 2009, 04:04:39 pm »
I like it, dude.  You might want to clarify exactly what you're talking about.  Some people probably didn't read your intro. :D
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Offline Kindran

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Re: True dependence
« Reply #2 on: January 13, 2009, 01:46:42 pm »
uh dude its in my species bar
Sors immanis et inanis (Fate - monstrous and empty)
Estuans interius ira veheminti (Burning inside with violent anger)

Through my travel's I've seen so much but I know, I know its good to be home
 - Me, when asked about coming back to Furtopia

Offline Kayle

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Re: True dependence
« Reply #3 on: January 13, 2009, 02:33:20 pm »
Yeah, but some people don't know what that is.
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Offline MathieuF0X

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Re: True dependence
« Reply #4 on: January 13, 2009, 09:16:36 pm »
I like not knowing what you mean. It let's my mind wander.  :)
"Every world has an end. Sometimes...you just have to look beyond reality."

"The world is my tide, but I am the ocean."

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Re: True dependence
« Reply #5 on: January 14, 2009, 01:24:16 pm »
Should we send a search party to find it if it wanders into a gutter somewhere? :D
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