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furry arts discussion => traditional and digital artwork => Topic started by: Plantan on September 11, 2014, 10:23:43 pm

Title: Plantan is apparantly good at art...
Post by: Plantan on September 11, 2014, 10:23:43 pm

so uhm, my art teacher has recently told me that I am going to me going on a trip for a portfolio review day at a local university... and uhm...she keeps telling me that she has no suggestions for my artwork...and I think I can improve in SOME way shape or form....so yeah...any suggestions??

Frank the Rabbit Painting-Donnie Darko
(http://i1329.photobucket.com/albums/w551/remingtonsmith4/0911142201a_zps986bc41e.jpg)
Conform Painting
(http://i1329.photobucket.com/albums/w551/remingtonsmith4/0911142201_zps0fd7daaf.jpg)
Eggs (Value Drawing)
(http://i1329.photobucket.com/albums/w551/remingtonsmith4/0911142200_zps64d66f91.jpg)
Celery(Value Drawing)
(http://i1329.photobucket.com/albums/w551/remingtonsmith4/0910142321_zps54cf28e6.jpg)
Wooden Block Interaction(Value Drawing) (I couldn't get it to rotate so...oh wells...)
(http://i1329.photobucket.com/albums/w551/remingtonsmith4/0910142220_zps5937d42e.jpg)

Title: Re: Plantan is apparantly good at art...
Post by: Alsek on September 13, 2014, 12:42:09 am

Good work.   The wooden cone is especially good.

On suggestions for improvement,  On your value drawings,  try to rely less on lines.  Work up to the edge value and then just stop.   Because the celery are going to be darker than your background anyways,  you don't need a line to show that it's stopped.  Just shade where it is.  ^^

Title: Re: Plantan is apparantly good at art...
Post by: Sergalicious on September 13, 2014, 02:20:06 am

nice i like the value ones personaly.

Title: Re: Plantan is apparantly good at art...
Post by: Plantan on January 30, 2015, 05:15:22 pm

(http://i1329.photobucket.com/albums/w551/remingtonsmith4/Mobile%20Uploads/0123151657a_zpsgkbijyui.jpg) (http://s1329.photobucket.com/user/remingtonsmith4/media/Mobile%20Uploads/0123151657a_zpsgkbijyui.jpg.html)

So this is probably my favorite artwork that I've done...probably ever..,this is pastel on bkakc paper...it's a cane, top hat, and dance shoes

Title: Re: Plantan is apparantly good at art...
Post by: Timberwuff on January 30, 2015, 11:58:53 pm

Beautiful! Great job all around.