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willishannon
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Crazy life
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June 27, 2011, 03:02:24 pm »
i like to wonder my mind
thinking about all the ways i went wrong
my past relationships
and wonder if i'll get it right
someday
maybe in my dreams
but not now its just
another unimaginable wish
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Shay Skull
PupLilith17
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June 27, 2011, 03:09:21 pm »
you still need punctuation
but its still good
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