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Offline Nate Dogg

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« on: July 24, 2005, 09:49:44 pm »
well i did this sorta random i guess and its my first time ever writing a song but gave it my bets and dont worry about being harsh i want all the details of how to make it better ^^ oh and this is not the whole thing this will just be the start of the song


take care sweet heart be happly my love this tiger of yours will always be there..*sings* his heart for you.... take care my sweet angel.....together forever....our love will brun....mity and strong.....never to die only to grow....this tiger of yours....his heart for you...be well my love....my loving sweet heart..... i will love you...forever and ever....take care my sweet love....and be well.....
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« Reply #1 on: July 24, 2005, 09:56:40 pm »
Nice writing as usual. '<img'>

If you wanted to make it a song though, needs to be longer. :P Maybe make the part where you break into song the chorus and make some more lyrics and stuff to go around it.



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« Reply #2 on: July 27, 2005, 12:19:17 pm »
well the song doesnt really have to be long it could be like a lullaby if so wished......sounds like one to me......all so the same.....heh....and ty nate i shall cherish it
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