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Offline Rushjunkie2112

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« on: February 12, 2004, 08:26:18 pm »
I  originaly wrote this in 1984.  I hope this doesn't stink too bad. ':blush:'


              The Beast


Chorus:    Hiding from light of day
              The beast hunts by night
              Taking what it needs to live
               On it's never ending flight


Sleeping in an alley....Waiting for the night.
Man's worse nightmare..in need of a fight.

It's features hard and cruel..it's manner about the same.
Drawing the life from it's prey...like an evil game.

Evil and destructive..it consumes it's victims soul.
So you better be careful..don't you heed it's siren's call.

Chorus:      Hiding from the light of day
                The beast hunts by night
                Taking what it needs to live
                On it's never ending flight

Once I was happy..but I headed for my fall
Although I was warned..I answered the beast's call

Taking all I could take ..wanting even more
Ruining all the lives I could..not knowing why or what for

So if you hear a voice offering all you'll ever need
Turn around and run from the beast known as greed






Whew now hopfully this doesn't reak too bad



 ':blush:'  ':blush:'
Down in a hole, feeling so small
Down in a hole,losing my soul
I'd like to fly,
But my wings have been so denied. ...Alice in Chains

 

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« Reply #1 on: February 12, 2004, 10:38:04 pm »
Any feed back would be nice....no flames please. Or at least till I get my asbestos shorts on. ':p'
Down in a hole, feeling so small
Down in a hole,losing my soul
I'd like to fly,
But my wings have been so denied. ...Alice in Chains

 

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« Reply #2 on: February 17, 2004, 12:33:08 am »
not bad.. i like it

right from the start i started singing it to my self in the style of the band rush, for the lyrics seem like the rush type. then, of course, i noticed your nickname '<img'>

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« Reply #3 on: February 17, 2004, 10:09:38 am »
I'm moving this topic seeing as it'd be more suitable in this forum rather than in the test lab...
 
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« Reply #4 on: February 17, 2004, 11:59:53 am »
Thanks Ben I wasn't sure if I should leave this in the test lab or not.(Didn't want to leave a ticking timebomb lying around. ':blush:'  I tend to be a little too critical of my work.
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Down in a hole,losing my soul
I'd like to fly,
But my wings have been so denied. ...Alice in Chains

 

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« Reply #5 on: February 18, 2004, 12:52:11 pm »
It's good... what kind of tempo/style did you have in mind for this one?  I am trying to get a rhythmic sound of it in my head.
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« Reply #6 on: February 20, 2004, 08:14:11 pm »
I was thinking of laid back industrial,  IE  70-90 beats per minute. speed metal just sounds to "cliche' " plus at that speed a nervous tension can be made if you know what I mean.
Down in a hole, feeling so small
Down in a hole,losing my soul
I'd like to fly,
But my wings have been so denied. ...Alice in Chains

 

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