Author Topic: Carter's Lyrics (Read 2605 times)

Hashira · « **on:** April 20, 2012, 05:26:05 pm »

*walks in carrying box. Takes a look around the topic.* is this a good place to share lyrics to songs that I wrote? I guess it is.

Now I won't be posting any of the religious music I wrote, but if you want it I can post it.

These are all just lyrics I write on my own, I plan on using em when I get into a band someday (with my bro Reverb xD). I've shared them on another site, and I wanted to share them here as well, but no matter how awesome the lyrics may seem i can't get em into music for a VERY long time

so I ask you just don't steal my songs... People won't steal my songs right? Meh, they haven't stolen them on the other site and furries are really nice people (but dragons and foxes are known for stealing...)!

Let's just see what happens when I post this song I wrote called "I'm the different one

" and clearly it's about being different but LOVING IT! I wrote this because it kinda sounds like the fandom to me. The sound of the song is kinda pop/punk rock and sounds like your rubbing it in someone's face (politely...), it should make you smile and want to dance

You say I'm so stupid
You say I'm a creep without a clue
You say I'm so different
You're right that time and it's okay
I'd never want to be any different way
Just like you, you know I'll never be
I'm the different one and it's all good with me!

I'm the different one
(and I love it, I love it, I love it)
I'm not the only one
(and I love it, I love it, I love it)
You can pick on me any way you want but you'll never be like me
Im the different one and it's all good with me!

You want me to fit in
You say I'm lost but I know my place
You say I won't make it
But that's not me it'll never be
I'm the one who's different I'm the one who's strange
That's something about me you can never change!

I'm the different one
(and I love it I love it I love it)
I'm not the only one
(and I love it I love it I love it)
You can pick on me any way you want but you'll never be like me
Im the different one and it's all good with me!

I've got my friends, I got what I need
There's nothing against you, I don't wanna put you down
Just understand that being different isn't easy
But I'm the different one and it's all good with me!

I'm the different one
(and I love it, I love it, I love it)
I'm not the only one
(and I love it, I love it, I love it)
You can pick on me any way you want but you'll never be like me
Im the different one and it's all good with me!
It's all good with me!
It's all good with me!

Enchantingly · « **Reply #1 on:** April 21, 2012, 03:15:51 pm »

*Claps* You're good! Keep writing lyrics like this! You might come to realize your dreams through music one day.

Hashira · « **Reply #2 on:** April 21, 2012, 10:57:46 pm »

Thnx Enchantingly :3 and I got me another song. It's about something we all got: insecurities. You know that nervous feeling you get in front of crowds? When you're just supposed to have a good time but you're just so nervous, and you end up watching it all fly by? That's what this ones about.
Thank you to furries to helping me overcome a lot of those silly nervous feelings and insecurities ^_^!

This one's called "The wall of insecurities" It sounds like a pop/punk song like the one above. I love the sound of a band called "Simple Plan" and that's kinda what I'm shooting for here.

(the song starts with a typical school scene. Lockers opening and closing, rustling papers, laughing, "AW DUDE!!", things like that, and slowly it fades into the song...)

I've already hit my limit
There's not even a moment i can stay
And not let it waste away
I just need a to take minute to make sure that I'm in it
I wanna know if I'm still alive, because this nervousness just might make me die!

I'm never sure
I'm never there
I've just never felt good anywhere
I'm too unstable
I'm too insecure
I just can't stand these feelings anymore
How can I feel like nothing on earth could put me down or stop me?
How can I break this insecurity?

Im tense and I lock up when someone I like will walk up and just try to be friendly to me
I can't stand in front of 2 people without that feeling like I gotta hurl
Why does this always happen to me?
How can I break this insecurity?

I'm never sure
I'm never there
I've just never felt good anywhere
I'm too unstable
I'm too insecure
I just can't stand these feelings anymore
How can I feel like nothing on earth could put me down or stop me?
How can I break this insecurity?

No balls, no guts, just pain, no glory
No life, no truth, no pride, just shame
There's always nobody else to go to and I'm the one to blame
I wanna play I wanna laugh i wanna scream I wanna yell!
I just wanna crack this stupid shell!

I'm never sure
I'm never there
I've just never felt good anywhere
I'm too unstable
I'm too insecure
I just can't stand these feelings anymore
How can I feel like nothing on earth could put me down or stop me?
How can I break this insecurity?

Jet · « **Reply #3 on:** April 22, 2012, 02:14:00 am »

Yous should seriously start getting a band together, or at least find yourself a band you can sell these to. Make some money off your talents!

Hashira · « **Reply #4 on:** April 22, 2012, 10:30:16 am »

Wow, people like em

! Thnx Jet, you know, me and Reverb are actually really good friends (not irl >.<), and he plays the drums, so we agreed to set up our own band someday! In the meantime, a kid in my neighborhood my age who plays the drums is also setting up his own band, so I sure as heck am going to look into that. But thanks for actually saying something about mai lyrics, makes meh feel special :3.

Hashira · « **Reply #5 on:** April 22, 2012, 01:03:17 pm »

Well, I've been trying to write something like this fora while and I FINALLY got an idea and it grew into this. I call it "Home" and it's like a Three Days Grace song.

I am like a nomad to say the least
I keep finding myself in the wrong place
Nowhere has made me felt secure
But somewhere is bound to for sure

Saying I found my place was a mistake
How many more changes have I gotta make?

This house is not a home!
This is not the place I belong!
It felt so strange and now I need to be alone!
I feel so much better on my own!
This house is not a home!

I don't know how I ended up in this hole
I went too far grave digging for my soul
It just seems like no surprise
I couldn't see where i was going with these bloodshot eyes

Now I feel like I'm floating in space
How many feelings do I have to retrace?

This house is not a home!
This is not the place I belong!
It felt so strange and now I need to be alone!
I feel so much better on my own!
This house is not a home!

There is no pain I'm just outta place
I know there's changes I gotta face
I finally see that I don't belong
This house will never be a home

This house is not a home!
This is not the place I belong!
It felt so strange and now I need to be alone!
I feel so much better on my own!
This house is not a home!

Hashira · « **Reply #6 on:** April 27, 2012, 07:02:50 pm »

Need something uplifting? Low self esteem? I got the song just for you! Take a look at this, I call it "Wonderful"
(I wrote it for pyscho :3)

Hey you
What you doing getting a down?
Did they say something mean, or an ugly lie?
Hey kid
What's with all the tears?
Did they put you down thought the years?

Oh listen baby nothing's gonna hurt you
Listen buddy nothing should stop you
Come on everybody take a look inside and see
The wonderful you
Look up its sunny
Another new day just around the corner
It's gonna be okay, it's gonna get better
Love yourself and it's gonna be alright

Attention please
Block out everything that they believe
Beating yourself up doesn't get you anywhere
Wake up kid
You're fooling yourself all over again
Didn't take time to see yourself within

Oh listen baby nothing's gonna hurt you
Listen buddy nothing should stop you
Come on everybody get up and see
The wonderful you
Look up its sunny
Another new day just around the corner
It's gonna be okay, it's gonna get better
Take your time and it's gonna be alright
Alright!

You've got great gifts, Listen to Jesus and you've got comfort
you're made so special, you're so unbelievable, listen to your heart
Wake up and see...

Oh listen baby nothing's gonna hurt you
Listen buddy nothing should stop you
Come on everybody get up and see
The wonderful you
Look up its sunny
Another new day just around the corner
It's gonna be okay, it's gonna get better
Take your time and it's gonna be alright
Its gonna be alright
Gonna be alright!

PsychotixxFoxx · « **Reply #7 on:** April 27, 2012, 07:03:44 pm »

*headbangs* \m/

Hashira · « **Reply #8 on:** April 27, 2012, 10:05:28 pm »

[deleted out of embarrassment]

Hashira · « **Reply #9 on:** May 06, 2012, 05:54:55 pm »

"Get up and go"
Loud
Hard
FAST

So what?
You gonna do it tomorrow?
That's what you said yesterday!
So what?
You're in a little big sorrow?
And you're waiting wasting the day!
You're not planning you're procrastinating!

Are you scared are you scared to do it?
Are you nervous? To nervous to try?
You wanna build confidence to get back in the show
And this is how you build it now get up and go!

oh!
You don't wanna ruin it?
Oh!
Don't you see any way you try it it will all turn out the same way?
You're just wasting everyday
You're not planning you're procrastinating!

Are you scared are you scared to do it?
Are you nervous? To nervous to try?
You wanna build confidence to get back in the show
And this is how you build it now get up and go!

Yeah! Don't Let pain stop you!
Don't burn it before it starts!
Yeah! Worst case scenario!
Forget about it now get up and go!

Are you scared are you scared to do it?
Are you nervous? To nervous to try?
You wanna build confidence to get back in the show
And this is how you build it now get up and go!

blkgli · « **Reply #10 on:** May 07, 2012, 03:05:10 pm »

my god, these are fantastic

how long did it take you to write these ?!

Hashira · « **Reply #11 on:** May 07, 2012, 04:13:54 pm »

Thank ya!

it can take me two weeks to have a spark ("Home" took my over a month...), or five minute to write one of these. There are songs I don't post here (religious songs) that can take a long time because music for me is all about it's meaning and not a bunch of words scribbled down on paper that sound good. I can supply you with a link to every song I've ever written (includes religious) if anyone wants.
Thanks a ton for your comments, all of you guys

Hashira · « **Reply #12 on:** May 13, 2012, 02:44:43 pm »

[song removed]

Hashira · « **Reply #13 on:** May 24, 2012, 06:08:59 pm »

This one I call "Shot", and it's about something that's happened to me too often. Where it just feels like someone, a close friend, shot you in the chest right in front of you and you're too scared to do anything about it. Enjoy.

*gunshot*
How? How does this happen?
What have I done? Why was that your reaction?
Just like the people here love just runs away

I can barely move
I can barely speak
Looks like my soul was just too weak
Know it from my tears
(my soul) jumps out of my skin
I've been shot again

I know I know I had my head in the clouds
I know I know I didn't want to come down
I can barely move now
Why'd you make it end?
I've been shot again

I can't breath
*snap* snap me back to life
I can't understand
couldn't you hold it inside?
Now it's so critical
I can barely move...
I've been shot again

No one can save me now except for you but you just threw me down
Is your conscience not working because mine's afraid to ask
I've been shot again

I know I know I had my head in the clouds
I know I know I didn't want to come down
I can barely move now
Is this the end?
I've been shot again

Look at all the blood! Mix it with my tears! I've been shot by you after all these years!
Look at my words! Read them over again! Please change your mind so I can move again!
Look all the blood! Look at my life! What did you expect?! Where was the respect?!
look at all my failures! look at how they blend! I've been shot I've been shot I've been shot again!

I know I know I had my head in the clouds
I know I know I didn't want to come down
Now Im locked up worried
Thinking its the end
I've been shot again

Nyeti · « **Reply #14 on:** June 11, 2012, 01:39:16 pm »

duuuude these lyrics are amazing!

i wish i could at least have the "spark" you speak of.all my lyrics come at the worst times,either when im almost asleep and i dont remember,or when i dont have anything to write them down

Leeseetsa · « **Reply #15 on:** June 11, 2012, 08:06:50 pm »

Soon.
Soon, I will get my cello re-stringed, and then I will come up with melodies and harmonies to these (with your guidance, of course). And my mom shall post it on the youtube account she keeps on telling us she'll get.
It will happen.

Hashira · « **Reply #16 on:** June 11, 2012, 09:02:42 pm »

Aw thanks guys :3 you made my day *hugs both of you* a cello... Amazing. So doing it! I have written a bunch more lyrics written down after a while, I'm working on putting together my first album so it's a secret untill all my lyrics are done, but I'll post a song or two from said album

But tanks guys, it means a lot to me :')

DarkDemon · « **Reply #17 on:** June 11, 2012, 09:20:32 pm »

I just read some of your lyrics, to get a feel on what you were talking about, and they are really good! :3

Hashira · « **Reply #18 on:** June 21, 2012, 10:51:33 pm »

[song removed for revision or for the junkyard]

ArticShadow · « **Reply #19 on:** June 21, 2012, 11:53:49 pm »

Nice job!!!!

Hashira · « **Reply #20 on:** July 22, 2012, 01:39:06 am »

This is "paralyzed". It's kinda embarrassing because it's a bit angry, and it's my thoughts and feelings in a strange, poetic way that I'm kinda nervous to share
This song is about your plan not going the way you thought at all and now everything is wrong, pretty much.
When the chorus comes in, I was thinking about holding the "I" in a scream for about two beats, so it sounds awesome xD. When I mean screaming, I don't mean death metal screaming. I mean hard rock, Linkin Park screaming. The rapping is more rap rock, too. Anyone who listens to Linkin Park will know exactly what I'm talking about and what I plan the song to sound like.
Enjoy.

[[these three lines are in a single voice with no instruments]]
I'm already lost
I've never been taught
I'm already lost from the start

[[this verse is all a rap like Linkin Park]]
I was falling straight to the ground
I didn't even look around
And all I thought I saw was a future I planned ahead
Looks like my plan's dead
Going down without a frown
I didn't even look around
Now I'm falling in pound after pound

[[screaming chorus]]
I hit the ground paralyzed
Saw the world with my own eyes, Own eyes
I hit the ground paralyzed
Looking for new eyes, new eyes

[[rapping]]
Now the land of confusion looks like it got no solution
I'm talking to three different parts of myself again
I'm talking about another sandman
Soon to fade away
There's nothing I can say

[[screaming]]
I hit the ground paralyzed
Saw the world with my own eyes, Own eyes
I hit the ground paralyzed
Looking for new eyes, new eyes

[[single voice, piano in the background]]
Take me away to the Spaces oh lord
Take me away so I can see
Take me away to new hights oh God
Because I hit the ground
Paralyzed

[[very wild screaming unlike the other chorus's]]
I hit the ground paralyzed!
Saw the world with my own eyes, Own eyes!
I hit the ground paralyzed!
Looking for new eyes, new eyes!
I hit the ground paralyzed!
Paralyzed!
Paralyzed!
I hit the ground!
Paralyzed!

What you think?

Nyeti · « **Reply #21 on:** July 22, 2012, 04:43:15 pm »

dude,im lovin these songs

,these are epic man!

i really like the newest one,like forreal,its so awesome