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Offline DoubleSwee

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Extremely radical Haikus I wrote
« on: August 23, 2015, 12:14:07 am »
I like to eat chips
I don't like them in hummus
That makes it taste gross

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Give me your money
So I can donate it all
To help local schools

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So, I sell propane
Would you like some propane, sir
High quality propane, here

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Haiku is so fun
My fingers hurt from counting
All the syllables

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Feel free to critique my Haiku or post your own haiku.
I want to hear some of your awesome haikus :)
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Re: Extremely radical Haikus I wrote
« Reply #1 on: August 23, 2015, 08:21:17 pm »
I like your poems.
Each one made me laugh really hard.
This haiku really sucks.

I'm not a poet
Because I write dumb things like
This horrible thing.
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Re: Extremely radical Haikus I wrote
« Reply #2 on: September 17, 2015, 01:48:32 pm »
Haiku are real hard...
'Cause they put limitations
On syllables used
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Re: Extremely radical Haikus I wrote
« Reply #3 on: January 16, 2016, 09:13:14 pm »
They are only hard
Because you must change the way
You handle your words
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Re: Extremely radical Haikus I wrote
« Reply #4 on: January 18, 2016, 08:56:21 pm »
I had forgotten
About this silly thread.
I still can't write these.
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