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Offline SchwarzeBomber

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Poem...
« on: April 17, 2015, 12:37:50 pm »
Argonian love letter

by  Lombardi jr.                                   Mar 28, 2013, 9:40:49 PM
Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Free Verse

Dearest,
The flower I gave you,
Is the most beautiful Skyim´s gift to a wondering soul.
I, as a bard
Am trying to find a words,
But I can't find any.
For your beauty can't be described ,
For it would be a offence.
But I have to say this,
or my heart will explode.
I love you
And I will allways
Until all of the Nirn cease to be.
My tiny argonian heart is yours,
Please, Shahvee don't keep me waiting...

Please give me you opinion sir/lady.
« Last Edit: May 08, 2015, 01:41:17 pm by SchwarzeBomber »
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Re: Poem...
« Reply #1 on: May 28, 2015, 06:48:46 am »
Very nicely done...
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Re: Poem...
« Reply #2 on: May 29, 2015, 03:01:49 pm »
Very nicely done...

Thank you very much sir. :)
Live to fight and fight to forget. Is that wise? Ich habe kein Ahnung....
Neka sada ratne igre prestanu
jer niceg vise nema u tebi, u meni
u mome srcu kise padaju
u dusi veju crni snegovi.