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Offline Shim

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One Phone Call - Monologue
« on: May 08, 2014, 04:56:58 pm »
Presenting this monologue Monday as part of one of my finals :)

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Offline Sergalicious

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Re: One Phone Call - Monologue
« Reply #1 on: May 08, 2014, 09:00:12 pm »
sounds neat. it reminds me of welcome to nightvale
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Re: One Phone Call - Monologue
« Reply #2 on: May 19, 2014, 10:55:41 pm »
I liked it,very well acted out too,über-congrats are in order ;)
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Re: One Phone Call - Monologue
« Reply #3 on: May 23, 2014, 07:39:22 pm »
I liked it, it used some parts of release theory and sucked you back in very effectively.

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Re: One Phone Call - Monologue
« Reply #4 on: May 24, 2014, 04:55:08 am »
I'm glad I killed the wrong girl?.. lol