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Offline siiwolf

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« on: January 30, 2004, 02:33:50 am »
Seemed like the best place to post this topic  '<img'>

Do you remember what the first story you ever wrote was about? It doesn't even have to be furry, though mine actaully ended up being anthro.

It was about this world called Raccoon City, and the entire planet was one big city and the only way to get to this world was through a black hole and a special ship that could enter fly in it's center. Well, one day they are out exploring worlds and they happened across earth, and the goverment panicked and, doing what any brilliant diplomat would do, surrounded the visiting starship with tanks and missiles and all kinds of things. Well, needless to say the raccoons took that as being hostile and they attacked earth.

They pretty much won too, having vastly superior technology. But as the fighting ensued the two sides didn't want to hurt each other, so they finally found a way to communicate and worked on a cease fire, once both species realized this war was caused by just one huge misunderstanding (and human paranoia that everything in the universe is out to get them). The leader of the raccoon force in this attack was Captain Jerry  '<img'>

Now I was only 8 years old when I wrote that so be gentle ':blush:'

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« Reply #1 on: January 30, 2004, 06:49:45 am »
In Primary 3 I think. The first full story I wrote was about my two dogs who got lost and found thier way back home. I think I still have it some where...
Well, I'll tell you one thing siiwolf, yours was definatly better than mine!
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« Reply #2 on: January 30, 2004, 11:39:44 am »
We had a  school literary magazine in elementary that published student stories and poems.  In lower primary, I wrote stories published there about goldfish who put on scuba-type gear containing water, and left their bowl to explore the larger world.  A later story I wrote that I remember the reaction to was written back in upper primary school, and was furry!  I don't remember a lot of the plot, but it involved an ape that grew to enormous size like King Kong, and used his great strength to escape from whatever restraints were placed on him  ("The steel bars flexed and twisted in his mighty grasp", I remember writing).  My teacher apparently showed the story to the school principal, who came around later to my class and told me that the story showed "polished writing," but that she wished I had chosen another topic!   I liked the praise, but didn't take her other critical commentary to heart... '<img'>
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« Reply #3 on: January 31, 2004, 07:52:47 pm »
I remember. 4th grade. Freewriteing. I wrote about a dragon/alien that came to our school. He was named kyle -_-'. He took revenge on all the slimey jerks at school  ':cool:'

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« Reply #4 on: February 19, 2004, 11:20:37 am »
I remember my first story... it was in the first grade and was about my dog, Sammy.  My parents always called him a Heinz57 though the most we could ever figure out was that he had a good deal of German Shepard in his blood.  I believe I wrote a total of four stories about him and I remember winning a county award of two IIRC.  All of the stories were anthro now that I think about it and were equally bizarre.  I remember one was about the anti-gravity chewing gum he invented.... and in another he made an airplane out of a cieling fan.  lol

Thanks for the topic.... I probably wouldn't have remembered this otherwise and I know I wouldn't have seen the connection.
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« Reply #5 on: February 19, 2004, 05:03:22 pm »
ah.. long time ago, I believe it had something to do with the three little pigs brutally attacking a village with boulders.. then the big bad wolf flew over in an A-10 and dropped a cluster bomb on them.. yeah, it was pretty cool.

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« Reply #6 on: February 19, 2004, 05:47:32 pm »
Well does it count if its not finished? Well my first story I writen that was not forced by an older person to write was a fan fiction for Wulfram II a game that I play (and volenteer for). I mostly write things now just in my notebook,  no one would like most of them anyways.



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« Reply #7 on: February 25, 2004, 09:06:33 pm »
I don't really think of school assignments and such.  The first story I sat down and wrote, simply for myself, was supposed to start as a simple history of a character.  He eventually evolved into BlueNinja (after I picked up the nickname a few years later).  It's pretty crappy, TBH, but since I wrote it in seventh grade it could have been worse.

It was the first thing I wrote completely by myself, and I never really finished it.  The first story I finished, without any collaberation, was my parody of Diablo2.
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