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Offline Iara Warriorfeather

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Novel-in-Progress: 'Iara's Crossing'
« on: September 01, 2012, 08:41:52 pm »
I have been developing my fursona Iara since 1996, and her story has changed so much over the years...I am now writing her story in novel form. Please read it and comment here, let me know what you think!  :D

http://www.furrag.com/viewstory.php?sid=1602

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http://chocolatestarfire.deviantart.com/art/Iara-s-Crossing-Prologue-Part-I-298629048

Follow the links to read the whole thing...or just read as much as you want and let me know what you think! :3 Thanks for reading!
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Re: Novel-in-Progress: 'Iara's Crossing'
« Reply #1 on: September 03, 2012, 06:07:57 pm »
OMIGOSH! BRAVO!!! Encore!!! I really did like it, it was interesting and very new. I haven't read anything, or really done anything, that has to do with avians so this was a new experiance for me. :3 I thought you wrote it well, I liked your detail, although it'd be fun to really be able to visualize their surroundings a bit more... (: no offense. I think the characters are pretty cool as well as their way of life ((The way they do stuff with mentors and such :3 As well as those shape-shifting powers, that was epic XP)) I'd like to see how this plot unfolds, please continue writing and post it here!!! :D XD
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Re: Novel-in-Progress: 'Iara's Crossing'
« Reply #2 on: September 03, 2012, 11:11:55 pm »
Thank you!! Glad you liked it. I will try to post it here as well as on dA and on several other websites haha.  (: My chapters tend to be a tad long...I hope that is okay for readers here...

I will introduce more of the setting in the next chapter...which I will write soon... :D
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Offline Iara Warriorfeather

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Re: Novel-in-Progress: 'Iara's Crossing'
« Reply #3 on: September 28, 2012, 03:52:47 am »
Chapter 6 is up! If anyone wants to read it here let me know and I will post it here as well.  (:
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