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Offline Wanda

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« on: May 27, 2004, 03:54:21 pm »
Hello '<img'>

I've been jotting down some ideas for a story and I thought I'd post some of them here, see what y'all think

The main character is Faye, a rebellious femenist sea-lion with leaf-green hair and an anti-drug sweater '<img'> She's a multilife, which means she's had several past lives but - unlike other people - she can actually remember them.
She has an episode while she's out protesting something and, while she's unconcious, sees snippets of her past lives and all the mental torture she's been through. It's a little sad ':cry:'
Obviously she's severely scared by all this and runs away from her current life, dying her hair green (it's naturally grey) and making herself more of a rebel; she joins a rough gang of teenage furries in the city and gets into quite a lot of trouble
But her past lives still haunt her while she sleeps, and as they become more clear she starts to recognise all of the people in them; for instance, in one of her flashbacks she's being beaten-up by someone bigger than her, then when she wakes up she realises it was her former brother ':shock:'
The story reaches the "climax" when her dreams reveal who has been responsible for each of her seven past deaths, and she starts to hallucinate him everywhere she goes, even runs away from her boyfriend because she thinks it was him. She goes back home for the first time since the beginning of the story and finds the man there, and realises it's none other than....

Heehee! What do you think? '<img'>
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« Reply #1 on: May 27, 2004, 04:04:32 pm »
Hey Wanda!

That sounds very interesting and sad. I say that is a good story idea and you should go for it. I hope soon that I get my stories and story ideas on these forums some day, than you can read mine. '<img'>

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« Reply #2 on: May 27, 2004, 04:16:05 pm »
Aw thanks '<img'>

Hey, are you new? Not seen you before ':shock:' and that means..... POUNCE!!!! *pounce hugs*
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« Reply #3 on: May 27, 2004, 04:24:33 pm »
Hello Wanda don't forget to layout your story in an outline so you don't write yourself into a corner plus write down all of your charicters so you can keep your facts straight. Good luck.
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« Reply #4 on: May 30, 2004, 12:10:11 am »
Quote (rushjunkie @ May 27 2004, 4:24 pm)
don't forget to layout your story in an outline so you don't write yourself into a corner plus write down all of your charicters so you can keep your facts straight.

Yeh, that's good advice.  Those seem to be my two biggest problems when writing, but now I make it absolutely MANDATORY to do an outline of my story and characters before I start writing.  It helps A LOT!   '<img'>

Also, whenever an idea for another part of your story or maybe even another character pops into your head...WRITE IT DOWN!  
I know sometimes when I'm sitting around or trying to get to sleep an idea will suddenly come to me and I just shrug it off thinking, "Meh, I'll remember it in the morning."  Never happens...   ':dead:'

But it sounds like it'll be a great story!  Can't wait to read it!  

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« Reply #5 on: June 01, 2004, 05:08:48 am »
Quote (Wanda @ May 27 2004, 4:16 pm)
Aw thanks '<img'>

Hey, are you new? Not seen you before ':shock:' and that means..... POUNCE!!!! *pounce hugs*

*is tackled by Wanda with her pounce and hug* Well, nice to meet you too. lol ':shock:'  '<img'>
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