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Offline Ryffnah

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Weremoose
« on: May 31, 2014, 04:09:46 pm »
My short story, "Weremoose," is available to read for free online in the latest issue of Untied Shoelaces of the Mind:

http://www.untiedshoelacesofthemind.com/Issue9/weremoose.php
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Re: Weremoose
« Reply #1 on: June 08, 2014, 05:01:14 am »
An interesting start. Might I suggest to use more descriptions? :3
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Offline Rocket T. Coyote

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Re: Weremoose
« Reply #2 on: June 28, 2014, 10:00:28 pm »
There was a weremoose episode to Ace Ventura--Pet Detective cartoon series.
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Re: Weremoose
« Reply #3 on: July 13, 2014, 07:57:56 pm »
It's nice, I like it.  :)
Though I do agree that it could use a little more description.
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