Hey, thanks everyone for stopping in and listening. It's been a while since I made that post so I was quite suprised to suddenly see four replies.
Midnight, your criticisms are well received. Some of the sound issues were me learning to use the tools that I have. I'm still learning, but the quality is improving.
The song is definitely lacking a melody. I took a course on electronic music after I finished that song and some of the things I learned pointed out problems with my personal work. Having a strong melody is one of them.
Most of my experience in writing music is with collaborating with others. I may write lyrics and one or two guitar parts, but it usually is a group effort in the band that I'm in. Many times I write my own part to a song, usually lead guitar, and that's it.
Trying to create something all on my own is a relatively new process and using the computer and soft synths is also new.
I may go back and see what I can do to make the song better with what I know now. The interest in it certainly has gotten me thinking about it again.
Thanks all,
Drake