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Offline desirulz123

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Need Critique Please ^^
« on: April 23, 2013, 06:41:44 pm »
I wish for a critique for this image please :D : http://s1194.photobucket.com/user/narutogod234/media/Anotherrequest_zps6fe3126a.jpg.html

Thanks in advance :D

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Re: Need Critique Please ^^
« Reply #1 on: April 25, 2013, 12:01:41 pm »
I don't know how long you have been drawing. It looks pretty well
over all, and would be an acceptable drawing as is. The things I notice
that you could do to make it look better would be in the finer details.

..The eyes look very nice.
..The inside of the ears could use a bit more detail.
..The shading along the ridge of the muzzle gives the
  illusion that it's  slightly off center with the front of
  the muzzle.

The front teeth are a bit irregular.

The drawing though good looks like it was done in a bit of
a hurry.

This is just my opinion of course.

Keep up the nice work. :orbunny:
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Re: Need Critique Please ^^
« Reply #2 on: April 25, 2013, 07:53:39 pm »
The only thing I can add is the neck looks a touch too long and the head is slightly off center.
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Re: Need Critique Please ^^
« Reply #3 on: April 26, 2013, 01:27:54 am »
WOW I love the eyes dude

Offline desirulz123

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Re: Need Critique Please ^^
« Reply #4 on: April 29, 2013, 05:00:43 pm »
Thanks for the help everyone :D