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Title: Poem...
Post by: SchwarzeBomber on April 17, 2015, 03:37:50 pm

Argonian love letter

by  Lombardi jr.                                   Mar 28, 2013, 9:40:49 PM
Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Free Verse

Dearest,
The flower I gave you,
Is the most beautiful Skyim´s gift to a wondering soul.
I, as a bard
Am trying to find a words,
But I can't find any.
For your beauty can't be described ,
For it would be a offence.
But I have to say this,
or my heart will explode.
I love you
And I will allways
Until all of the Nirn cease to be.
My tiny argonian heart is yours,
Please, Shahvee don't keep me waiting...

Please give me you opinion sir/lady.

Title: Re: Poem...
Post by: Tommy Fox Stone on May 28, 2015, 09:48:46 am

Very nicely done...

Title: Re: Poem...
Post by: SchwarzeBomber on May 29, 2015, 06:01:49 pm

Quote from: Tommy Fox Stone on May 28, 2015, 09:48:46 am

Very nicely done...

Thank you very much sir. :)