Wow, this is actualy better than 90% of all the commercial trance that's out there. The one thing I would recommend is maybe spice those 'laser' sounds up a bit and put them in sections where theres no melody, as right now your track is all melody. Which isn't a bad thing. It's just sometimes it's good to have non-melodic elements.
Other than that little nitpick, I think you got a great thing going.