please come and criticize this WIP ( it needs it)

[Sergalicious]

hi, i am making a dubstep gun as i have said in another post ( http://forums.furtopia.org/tech-talk/dubstep-gun-ideas-and-tips/ ) and i have been working on the audio file for it. the current version is just a mix of the "drops" from multiple dubstep songs. i am using audacity and so far have a basic set-up. the songs i am currently using are; spitfire, rage valley, bonfire, centipede, sleaze, hold on (sub focus remix), and maybe more later. i tried to put them in order of slowest to fastest tempo so its a little organized. i have also compressed it so it is a bit more clear, ten it would be without. i want you to listen to it and help me improve it. a main area for improvement would be smoothing the transition between "drops". also you can name other songs i should use/not use or any other ideas. here it is https://soundcloud.com/kentaro-wingren/01-dubstep-gun3

dont be afraid to criticize it i want it to be (thats why its here) thanks

also if you dont know what a dubstep gun is it is something like this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hDlif8Km4S4 ( with less flying laser beams and more LEDs)

EDIT i might add flux pavilion "bass cannon" http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h3cE9iXIx9c

[Jackie]

I would, But dubstep is not my area of expertise,  , i like all music but i am not very knowledgable when it comes to dubstep music tech.