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Offline Bear Paw

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Just too keep me ticking over
« on: June 13, 2003, 12:59:12 am »
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All I want too do is leave paw prints in the sands of time. (Garfield)
To be forgotten is worse than death (Freya)
We are all equal in the fandom. ( WhiteFang good fur and friend )
I am not a dancing bear toothless claw less here for your amusement, more like the other way round.

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« Reply #1 on: June 13, 2003, 01:14:42 am »
very good bear, i like the imagery of the cold and the dawn and the way that your world is mysterious and never comes to full clarity, but isnt so distant as to be uninteresting, again i say very good work
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Or i could be wrong, its been known to happen,     a lot,       (headhang and sigh).

Nobu" means "faith", "trust" and "fiedelity". "naga" is the kanji for "long".

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« Reply #2 on: June 15, 2003, 08:45:54 pm »
Thanks Nobunaga It's nice to know I still have a little talent left in me  '<img'> . Keep writing your's though there seems to be a bit of a re-vival going on in this section so it's good too see some fresh stuff flooding in.
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All I want too do is leave paw prints in the sands of time. (Garfield)
To be forgotten is worse than death (Freya)
We are all equal in the fandom. ( WhiteFang good fur and friend )
I am not a dancing bear toothless claw less here for your amusement, more like the other way round.

Offline Dexter, you know, the fox

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« Reply #3 on: June 15, 2003, 11:10:08 pm »
Bear Paw

How many times have I felt the hand of that friend/lover/angel on my shoulder in the hard hours? Your poem made me think about all the times I've needed that hand and it wasn't there and all the times it was. Thanks for reminding me of that, Bear Paw. It was a great poem.
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« Reply #4 on: June 16, 2003, 10:29:43 am »
Another wonderful piece, BearPaw.

I have felt those arms at times when WS hasn't been around and it has helped me know he is still there with me.   '<img'>
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