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Offline Ashes

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« on: November 09, 2003, 06:20:10 pm »
Flying over me
Do you see something I cannot see?
Can you see the breeze above you
And the whisp'ring western winds...
Can you feel the love in the clouds?
Oh I wish I could with you,
White bellied bird.

Do you chuckle at
The same things that we all do?
Can you watch a tear fall from your little eyes
As the egg below you cracks...
Do you scream up at the sky?
I do, I wish you could too,
White bellied bird.

As the waters rush
In and out
Do you notice the sand below?
Or do you only see the blue skies
Above you...
The ocean goes in and out just the same,
White bellied bird.

Does a tear drop fall from your little eyes
As a gunshot cracks from below
White bellied bird?
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(A tribute to a fallen seagull outside our home)
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Offline River Ceed

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« Reply #1 on: November 09, 2003, 08:25:32 pm »
Well written piece, especially with the referrences to how simmilar the bird's life is to that of the species who shoots it.

Post more of your original pieces.  I would like to see them, as I am sure others would. :-)

~River

Offline Nobunaga

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« Reply #2 on: November 10, 2003, 10:49:26 pm »
':.' wow, thats a quality piece of work ashes, i'm very impressed, i'd go into depth but i really think the poem speaks for itself. good job.
Or i could be wrong, its been known to happen,     a lot,       (headhang and sigh).

Nobu" means "faith", "trust" and "fiedelity". "naga" is the kanji for "long".