A few years past I lost my writer's flame. I have been trying to rekindle it. You maybe able to guess a little at my inspiration. Please be brutal in your criticism.
"I feel that you are slipping away,
I must tell you how I feel today,
I open my my mouth, but it goes dry,
You turn to me and I cannot help but cry,
You see my tears in wonder of what is wrong,
I must say it for the urge is strong,
I say I love you and clasp your hand,
I watch in fear and shame as you stand,
Your stare seems to last an eternity,
I know that if you leave I shall grieve eternally,
My heart is in agony of loss, but your hand grasps to mine,
You pull me close and say all will be fine,
I stand shocked in astonishment,
I have always wished for this moment,
In fear I wait, could this be true,
Then it happens, you say I love you too."