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Blaze_Wolf
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Poem Comments and Critic
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August 14, 2013, 07:33:49 am »
I've been facing trouble lately as I don't know whether my poems are going in the right direction or not. I need a critic on Pacing and possible advice to show improvement in the poems. I'm only posting 2 here while the rest are on my FA page.
Note: Rhyming is not my style of poetry as it causes restriction of flow and limitation in expression and thinking. So please do not suggest rhyming as a advice.
Despair
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8577140/
Love
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9024834/
The Wolf Pack
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/11088133/
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