Suppressed Pain

[WhiteAkitaKeiko]

Time is our concern
Whoever seeks the past?

The men whose has been hurt.
For means is always deep inside.

The pain will be not omitted.
Whom seeks the truth,
For it, is near.

Exuberance never fade, it's us whom changes the fate
Our spirit is being crushed.


The animal falls, so hopeless.
The tears fall on bloody floor,
Darkness laugh.

There we stand, fighting with ourselves.
Naught can be done.

Its too late now, the eyes already see the light.
Now it's all over, everything is completely blank


I felt down today, so I wrote a poem. Comments are welcome  

[Hesper Scott]

I was expecting some emo drivel (I suppose I read one too many poems on Quizilla) but it was actually an excellent poem. Although, I think you made a typo with "tears falls". I think you meant "tears fall".

[WhiteAkitaKeiko]

Thank you Hesper for your kind words 

And yes, I made a typo, but I corrected it, thanks for notifying me  .