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[willishannon]

" pain means nothing to u i mean nothing i  am just a toy for you to play me  like a fool my tears are just drops of liquid"

 

     " pain just another distraction

our love is being thrown away and i kant do a thang it's over so girl when he looks at u dont take it for granted"

 

" forget the pain you put me through all i wanted was  to feel your embrace to taste your lips and to finally have your body and things i crave to do  with  impure thoughts from me to you"

 

 Curtis is my ex yes but only he helped me in my time of need he was the only one who stood by me and never gave up on me but even though our love is gone April 14 2009 ment alot me and seemed like he still cares so bleep all the haters he will be my brother my ex and my friend! <April 14, 2009>

[PupLilith17]

you should put those in stanzas

and your a true poet sis

[Ragnorrock_13]

very very dark, I dare say.

Are you consumed within a whirlpool of negative emotion, or are you like me and your imagination seems to stray to the dark side?

[Rush]

Come, take off your mask,
Just join in the fun.
We can frolic and play,
Just... stay out of the sun.

If it's from the heart,
And sounds like it to me,
Then I'll just say this,
I like your poetry

[willishannon]

ummmmmm yea me kinda dark