Ok, everyone. I am about a post poem that has no definitive ryhme scheme (What? No ryhme? It does happen) or seperation pattern. It is more like an epic poem, because it is so long. While writing it I realized that there is a lot of detail, but a great many of gaps. I believe that I will turn it into a story. Yet agian I ask for brutal criticism. As I said it is long, quite possibly too long, but what the hell.
~Discovery~
I remember that day,
I remember it well,
You wanted to talk,
You had something to tell,
We met in the park,
And you lead me down a trail,
We reached a place of deep seclusion,
There you stared into my eyes for many minutes,
I sat in wonder of what was to come,
The silence grew to the point of breaking,
Your stare became unsettling,
I told you to let it out,
You let out a sigh and clasped my hand,
I returned your gaze with one of fear and confusion,
What could shake you so badly,
I watched as your eyes filled with tears,
Your grip on my hand tightened,
You opened and closed your mouth a few times,
In a hoarse whisper you said it,
Your voice barely broke the silence,
'I Love You',
I sat in shocked amaze,
Thoughts and emotions filled me,
Confusion, Anger, Fear, and something else,
Out of confusion I lashed out,
I pulled my hand away,
My best was gay?,
I pushed you away and stood to leave,
I turned and headed for home ignoring the pain in your eyes,
Sitting at home I contemplated the night,
How could this be?,
My mind was flooded with thoughts,
I kept thinking of the pain and sorrow in your eyes,
I knew that my reaction was to harsh,
I sat up all night,
Unable to sleep,
I felt a strange emotion,
Could it be?
I sat and realized,
I loved you too,
I greeted the dawn with a tear streaked face,
I thought 'God, I hope it's not too late',
You had not been to work that day,
I got no answer at your home,
I ran over to your house and heard crying within,
I opened the door and called to you,
There was no answer,
In your bedroom I found you,
As I moved forward I saw a pistol in your hand,
I rushed forward and grabbed it from you,
You looked up at me with a blank gaze,
I begged you not to kill yourself,
You asked what was the point of living,
My mouth ran dry as I made my next move,
I could feel in my heart that this was right,
I told you I only had one reason for you to live,
I gathered my strength and grabbed your shoulders,
I had tears in my eytes as I said,
'Live, because I love you too',
The look you gave me so full of joy,
I felt my heart loosen,
You pulled me in for a warm embrace,
We stood the for what seemed an eternity,
With that all of my fears vanished from my mind,
Now here we are,
A few years later,
Two souls that have become one,
Both giving mind, body, and soul to the other,
Niether ever again alone,
Forever Together."
Hope you like it. Tell me if you think I should write the story versions.