the following lyrics are to a song me and my guitarist wrote called "the path i walk" it is a metal/ hard rock song inspired by mudvayn's a world so cold. Please be brutally homest.
ok...here goes.
[start]
i walk up this road
so lost cold and alone
So cold i can't breath
so as i watch te sun set
the moon shine sun glistens
and i'm wrapped up in
the feeling of being unknow
[bridge]
the moon light shines so bright
so bright it lights up the sky
and the clouds up so high
they end
where the heavens begin
[chorus]
why
can't i think
i move my mout
but the words don't come out
all this pressure
has me about to fade out
the path i walk
it winds and has no end
the path of strife
that i can't help but defend
[verse2]
i must try
to claim my life for me
to get stronger in knowledge
and my everything
restrain the flame
of anarchy
and bring out the good
that was lost in me
[chorus]
why
can't i think
i move my mout
but the words don't come out
all this pressure
has me about to fade out
the path i walk
it winds and has no end
the path of strife
that i can't help but defend
[bridge]
the sun shines so bright
so bright it ignites the sky
and the clouds up so high
they end
where the heavens begin
[breakdown]
No!
i cannot take this anymore
your driving me nuts
i'm done but you can't get enough
push and pull
take my life
this isn't right
this is my life
It's my life!
and i've had enough
go away
out my face
don't want to hear you scream
as i walk down
the path to discover
ME!!!
[chorus]
i can finally think
i mive my mouth
and the sound pours out out
all the pressure
has ebbed away
the path that i walk
is finally clear
no more strife
so i can live my life.
[end]
Like it? hate it? wanna slap me? tell me.
