Darius Greywind's pic

[Prince Karo]

here you go! '>

[Cesarin]

looks good,only few suggestions.. try to define the paws more.. and try to use white paper.. common paper for school sometimes can ruin a good picture.

[Yip]

I have to second that you should use white paper. You'd be amazed how much better that would make this picture look. The paper lines tend to make the picture look flat (which is almost always a bad thing.)