Author Topic: Prologue (Read 3367 times)

Firebreath · « **on:** October 24, 2003, 03:48:03 pm »

Okay, so I've been working on this project for a while. I readproof myself couple times, but being a french canadian and english being my second language, I can hardly find all the mistakes I made.
So, I ask for your help. ^^;
And feel free to make comments too! Constructive criticism will be met gladly! ^^

I also offer the file in two formats for your viewing pleasure.
Prologue - HTML file (tested under IE 6, NS7 and Opera 7 without problem)
Prologue - TXT format. Encoded in windows format with line breaks

Questions? Comments? Insults? ^^;

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Just to mention, I personally rate it PG-8 (I don't know if such a rating exists in US) for violence. Yeah, it ain't a work of comedy. I can't do comedy.

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Your actual mileage may vary

Running_Wolf · « **Reply #1 on:** October 25, 2003, 05:11:32 am »

Just reading throuhg it now. A bungalow only has one floor Â

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[EDIT]typo ':blush:'

[ADDITION]I like it. Can't wait for the full story.

beyond the darkness · « **Reply #2 on:** October 25, 2003, 06:58:07 am »

I'm with Running_Wolf, think it'll be great when finished!

Rikimaru · « **Reply #3 on:** October 25, 2003, 10:16:04 am »

very good well done dude!

cant wait 4 the final product!

Firebreath · « **Reply #4 on:** October 25, 2003, 11:09:40 pm »

Running: Thanks a lot for that! I'll correct it ASAP... ^^;

As for everyone, thanks a lot for the feedback, and here's chapter 1. Again, in the two file formats for your viewing (dis)pleasure.

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Chapter 1 - HTML
Chapter 1 - TXT

Enjoy. ^^
And again, thanks all for the feedback!

Chaz_wolf · « **Reply #5 on:** October 26, 2003, 09:35:50 am »

Howls Firebreath,

Looking great, I like it.
Hope it keeps flowing smothly for you.

Your folfy
Chaz

beyond the darkness · « **Reply #6 on:** October 27, 2003, 09:27:43 am »

Your story is looking really good, can we expect any more soon (I hope so)

Firebreath · « **Reply #7 on:** October 27, 2003, 07:00:43 pm »

Thanks you guys. ^^

Well, so far, I have up to chapter 8 written, tho I have to revise that last one and keep on writing.

It makes up for 78 pages total, for those interested (and that'll only go higher... And, by the way, it's a trilogy, although probably not a book trilogy.

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I'll post some other chapters as time come and I proof-read them again... I'll be hoenst, I still find mistakes up to today, and I've been doing that for couple months now.

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Firebreath · « **Reply #8 on:** October 29, 2003, 07:24:04 pm »

Okay, due to a mistake on my part, you're getting TWO chapters tonight.

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Just don't expect frequent updates in the near future... it's approaching what I have so far, and fast.

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Chapter 2 - TXT
Chapter 2 - HTML
Chapter 3 - TXT
Chapter 3 - HTML

Enjoy!