I totally agree with Mylo. In the novel its good you dont know what is going on, so you see it as if you were the characters. What I was getting at is that this is a summary of you novel to get any ideas from us about whether its good or where it needs work. Or at least thats how it came off to me. Sadly, I dont know anything about the novel off this summary. It seems a good start, but without a more in depth description of the plot, I cant tell you where the plot falls flat or where you have it right. Also, I like the idea of wolves, but it really only makes sense to me if they are anthros. I assume they are because they have formed a sort of society, and humans cant really picture animals forming a human-like society without them being part human in some way. So wolf Anthros I can see. As for feral wolves, I cant picture it that well, sorry...
