Congrats on the opening of your site my friend. You said it took a while to get everything together, but you know what they say, "You cannot rush genius." *laughs* I will give you praise I know that ahead of time, and I will try to give you criticism too.
And first the praise:
The site itself is simple and easily navigated. Tis nice to see another going the simple route that I did. Tis something that is quite refreshing after spending time on huge, mega flash sites.
And as for your poetry...
The adult rated one is excellent, truly brings across the want and desire, the excstacy and joy found in the act of love making. Kudos on the work.
"Ode to My Tail" is, as I have stated before, quite wonderful. Its humorous and at the same time truthful. It brings a smile to my muzzle.
"Feeding the Blind" Tis a great work, flowing through the ryhmes and bringing acros the sadness and angst, or atleast that is what I get out of it.
And now for the criticism:
The site, like I said, is simplicity in itself. This makes it great, but the color scheme. Grey, everything is grey. If that is what you want then go for it. Maybe try a purple or something. *shrugs* Just my opinion.
The adult poem I have nothing to complain or criticize really. I mean it is a well written piece and the only thing I don't like about it is a matter of personal choice so tis not important to post it here.
"Ode to My Tail" brought a tear to my eye the first time you posted it, along with the smile. It makes me sad that I lack such a tail myself. That is my only complaint.
"Feeding th Blind" This poem is dark and brooding. I know I write many like this too. Tis a way to release some inner demons usually. So this poem caused me concern that perhaps you had something bad happen to you. Yet again I lack anything o criticize.
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I tried to criticize. I looked over and over your poems and found nothing to say against them really. As for you music that will have to wait for another time. Good Luck on your site Drake.