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There's some really nice work in there, Kada! I can see you've been making good use of references. *smiles* My favorite of the bunch is the second unicorn, I love the pose and the tilt of the head. Here are some tips, I hope they will be useful: Your wings have improved a lot, but you should try to make the feathers look less wooly. Feathers have very sharp outlines. The most prominent detail in the feather is the shaft. The barbs are less visible. |
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Your poses look "flyswatted"; all body parts are drawn either straight on (100% foreshortened) or from the side (0% foreshortened). Try to vary the angles more, it will make your characters look much more 3-D and alive. (Curious observation: your horse heads don't have this problem.) |
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Be bold when shading in color. The darker areas are relatively small, and don't contrast much with the rest. (The first pegasus does have some nice shadows in the inkwork though! ) |