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Offline Leon Ecrivain

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Light of the World
« on: July 16, 2012, 06:53:15 pm »
Well I was just messing around with this idea and well I don't have all of it I just want to know what you guys think.. So thanks for your feedback :D

The light of the world had faded, leaving nothing to see. The people of the world had hidden in a great cave system, dug by their ancestors. Using the magic of the ancestors they learned to make a light to see in the caves. One day one of the people, a child, decided to explore even against his mother’s wishes. So he set out to explore.

Offline Nyeti

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Re: Light of the World
« Reply #1 on: July 17, 2012, 02:11:13 am »
i like it  :)  go with the flow man!!!!!! :D
i really have a crazy thing for orange juice...and apples o.o

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