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Offline Nobunaga

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A new poem to celebrate some self discovery
« on: June 10, 2003, 12:58:59 am »
Hmm, hope everyone enjoys this as much as i did writing it,
and i apologise for the relish rhyme up front


                           a window to myself

this world while bleak and scary
with it hope and love it carries
its hard to find and harder to keep
but we all have a window to it as we sleep
our dreams while sometimes hellish
are something we all relish
for they give us oportunity and chance
to be the things we wish at last
they free us from this realities box
and i my friends am a fox.
Or i could be wrong, its been known to happen,     a lot,       (headhang and sigh).

Nobu" means "faith", "trust" and "fiedelity". "naga" is the kanji for "long".

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A new poem to celebrate some self discovery
« Reply #1 on: June 12, 2003, 10:28:02 pm »
Now this one is great. I just finished reading it and sat there open-mouthed. It was fast, easy, and the interruption of rhythm at the end was inspired. It shot like a bullet, and I cannot deny that you are indeed a fox. Bravo.

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A new poem to celebrate some self discovery
« Reply #2 on: June 12, 2003, 10:41:53 pm »
*claps wildly* you have got to stop producing work of such quality like this or els im gonna run out of ways to praise it  '<img'> . What more can I say than this is the best stuff I have read in a good while you have the gift. You are indeed a fox of vast talent.
Use it well and write some more.
All I want too do is leave paw prints in the sands of time. (Garfield)
To be forgotten is worse than death (Freya)
We are all equal in the fandom. ( WhiteFang good fur and friend )
I am not a dancing bear toothless claw less here for your amusement, more like the other way round.

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A new poem to celebrate some self discovery
« Reply #3 on: June 12, 2003, 11:55:12 pm »
thanks again all, if you like it tell your friends, ill be putting up more in the first fur related poem thread, its gonna be my "official" place for new stuff as i write it for now, im still working the kinks out of my style and such so hopefully itll get better as i go, thanks again all, hope to see you later in my other thread.


         ~nobunaga The red~
Or i could be wrong, its been known to happen,     a lot,       (headhang and sigh).

Nobu" means "faith", "trust" and "fiedelity". "naga" is the kanji for "long".