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Furtopia Group Poem! Come Join!
« on: October 24, 2011, 07:26:32 pm »
Yay! I wanna do a group poem! Will it be perfect? No! Will it still be awesome? Hell yeah! :)

When you add to the poem, just add one single line to it.  Just one.  I won't set a word limit, but try not to make the line too long.  As the poem grows, I'll edit this post and put it all together so we can see what it's becoming!  Also, try to add a lot of descriptive adjectives and nouns.  They sound really cool!  (also, if you want to discuss things here, just be sure to put them in parentheses or italics so we can tell them apart)

Here we go! The first line (and, yes, I'm ending with an adjective):

Crack. Sound of Winter, a gemmed

And here's the poem so far:

Crack. Sound of Winter, a gemmed
mask of sullen emotion basks in
cold light of the white hot sun. Standing on
shallow ground, I bathe with
a river stone, feeling smooth against rough, past against

present. As false pretenses fall away I stand
confident in my actions, but doubtful in my
resolve. The way ahead of me
is a straight line through a chasm of infinite possibilities, and I
stand ready to face the challenges,
aware of the lost world behind my stride.  The

two-necked canyon flows with floods
« Last Edit: November 08, 2011, 09:52:39 pm by Alexandre »
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Re: Furtopia Group Poem! Come Join!
« Reply #1 on: October 24, 2011, 07:35:08 pm »
mask of sullen emotions basks in
Semi-Retired from Furry.
 - - - -
Come bitter Rain,
And wash from my Heart
That saddest of all Words: Home

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Re: Furtopia Group Poem! Come Join!
« Reply #2 on: October 24, 2011, 08:37:29 pm »
cold light of the white hot sun. Standing on

((oh, now I get it...I think))
« Last Edit: October 25, 2011, 11:42:55 am by Mylo »

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Re: Furtopia Group Poem! Come Join!
« Reply #3 on: October 25, 2011, 09:23:27 am »
(you got it, Mylo!)

shallow ground, I bathe with
« Last Edit: October 26, 2011, 12:52:06 am by Alexandre »
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« Reply #4 on: October 27, 2011, 10:54:26 pm »
a river stone, feeling smooth against rough, past against

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« Reply #5 on: October 28, 2011, 12:15:53 am »
present. As false pretenses fall away I stand
Semi-Retired from Furry.
 - - - -
Come bitter Rain,
And wash from my Heart
That saddest of all Words: Home

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« Reply #6 on: October 28, 2011, 01:58:35 pm »
confident in my actions, but doubtful in my

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« Reply #7 on: October 28, 2011, 02:37:47 pm »
resolve. The way ahead of me
Semi-Retired from Furry.
 - - - -
Come bitter Rain,
And wash from my Heart
That saddest of all Words: Home

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« Reply #8 on: October 28, 2011, 07:06:30 pm »
is a straight line through a chasm of infinite possibilities, and I

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« Reply #9 on: November 02, 2011, 04:55:08 pm »
stand ready to face the challenges
Semi-Retired from Furry.
 - - - -
Come bitter Rain,
And wash from my Heart
That saddest of all Words: Home

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« Reply #10 on: November 02, 2011, 05:01:22 pm »
, aware of the lost world behind my stride.  The

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« Reply #11 on: November 08, 2011, 09:52:45 pm »
two-necked canyon flows with floods
Allasso, Volume 2: Saudade is now out!  Feel free to check it out ^_^

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« Reply #12 on: November 08, 2011, 10:01:33 pm »
while the window prism shines its hues.  As stars

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« Reply #13 on: November 09, 2011, 03:09:17 am »
blink in and out of existence above me, so too
Semi-Retired from Furry.
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Come bitter Rain,
And wash from my Heart
That saddest of all Words: Home

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« Reply #14 on: November 27, 2011, 10:06:55 am »
(anyone still interested in this?)
Semi-Retired from Furry.
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Come bitter Rain,
And wash from my Heart
That saddest of all Words: Home

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« Reply #15 on: November 27, 2011, 01:09:16 pm »
do my thoughts, my ideas, ebb and flow.  Fire

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« Reply #16 on: November 27, 2011, 01:37:46 pm »
and ice, water and earth, all are
The brain is capable of amazing things. If we could unlock its full power, magic would truly exist.

And it does get so much better!

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« Reply #17 on: November 27, 2011, 01:53:39 pm »
set in motion.  Revolution strikes the balance as

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« Reply #18 on: November 27, 2011, 01:57:50 pm »
Turning they act as one. When
The brain is capable of amazing things. If we could unlock its full power, magic would truly exist.

And it does get so much better!