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Offline Bear Paw

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« on: March 26, 2003, 07:48:18 pm »
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« Reply #1 on: March 26, 2003, 08:28:06 pm »
Very nice, Bear Paw! (claps wings)
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« Reply #2 on: April 03, 2003, 07:02:57 pm »
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All I want too do is leave paw prints in the sands of time. (Garfield)
To be forgotten is worse than death (Freya)
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« Reply #3 on: April 04, 2003, 02:01:35 am »
A superb work Bear Paw.

I love the imagery and the way the poem flows. The line with the cathedral is my favorite. The whole poem gives me a feeling of peace and belonging and it closes so gently. I really love it.

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« Reply #4 on: April 04, 2003, 11:48:28 am »
"Look Again" is a really clever poem.  I like how it describes you seeing everyday things as your dream-land.  It shows how your escapism is built upon from what your heart sees by what your eyes see from around you, if you understand me.  Good work, Bear Paw.
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« Reply #5 on: April 04, 2003, 10:21:08 pm »
I really enjoyed your new poem, Bear Paw. As I was reading it I could 'see' the imagery in my minds eye and could 'feel' what it was saying.

Next time I am in a city, I will remember this poem and see it in a different view! Thanks for sharing.
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