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Offline Nabru Wolfpup

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Animal inside me
« on: May 04, 2012, 01:42:25 am »
Animal Inside Me

I can feel it when i close my eyes
My friends tell me its all a lie
But i know its true i can feel it now
I still wonder how

It long and fluffy its tip is black
This body will never hold me back
I know its true i can feel it now
I have a tail and i wonder how

I am a wolf i know its true
I am no longer feeling the blues
I have my tail in my hands
Now its time for my master plan


What do you furs think? (:

Offline Jet

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Re: Animal inside me
« Reply #1 on: May 04, 2012, 02:15:48 am »
That's some really good stuff. I dont know much about poetry, but it sounded good to me. At first it sounded like it was a bad thing that lived within and was trying to get out, but by the end, I saw it more as a release of the furry within oneself. Really good. :)
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Offline Hashira

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Re: Animal inside me
« Reply #2 on: May 04, 2012, 07:08:14 am »
(plays Skillet - Monster) if it kinda world with this song, you sir have a good poem :D
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Re: Animal inside me
« Reply #3 on: August 02, 2012, 11:13:16 pm »
I really liked it, a nice poem talking about releasing ones furriness is definitely what i need right now. thanks!
I'm just another teenage furry, though im not all that active in the fandom due to not wanting to associate myself with a fandom with such a bad rep. If anyone remembers me from a couple years ago when i first joined id like to formally apologize for you having to suffer that. im potatolumps on tumblr if you want to check out my blog or whatever, just know i dont often post anything furry related